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Late November

The corn stalks are bare
Scarecrow in tatters
'Quoth the raven'   "Nevermore"

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/24/2010 12:26:00 AM

Hey, here is one I missed!! Good one for Halloween coming! Thanks for your comment on my tree poem. Luv, Andrea

Maryam Jameela Haniff

Date: 1/19/2009 3:45:00 PM

nicely written haiku....*thanx for the congrats...Maryam*

Elaine George

Date: 12/3/2008 3:58:00 AM

LOVE THIS ONE! poe is my favorite famous poet and this reminds me of him. You have created a dark and haunting ambiance in these few lines. AWESOME! LAINIE

Brian Strand

Date: 12/3/2008 1:04:00 AM

Beautiful work here Daver.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Date: 11/30/2008 3:42:00 PM

Clever use of this short form. I enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind words regarding my poem. Happy Writing! Karen

John Heck

Date: 11/28/2008 3:42:00 PM

Haunting and brooding. Loved the Edgar Allan Poe overtones! Creepy - yet, oh so much fun to read! Wishing you and your loved ones Happy Holidays. Peace always, John

Ali Matheny

Date: 11/25/2008 11:58:00 AM

Read my new poem and tell me what you think of it, Please?! :) Love Alexz

Juliane Thomas

Date: 11/25/2008 8:32:00 AM

I love Poe and your use of "The Raven" in this great haiku! Very clever!

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/24/2008 11:54:00 AM

Poor scarecrow. I do not like those birds. But I do love the creepy Poe feeling here. Well done Daver. Love, Shar

Michael Jordan

Date: 11/24/2008 8:27:00 AM

Very cleaver Daver, God Bless, MJ