Late At Night

I search the depths of my mind
to find the words any words
in an attempt to crystallize
what you mean to me
and miserably I fail

coming up empty
till a void rises and growls
its silent voiceless roar
and I find myself
on edge chasing its echo

reaching to grasp what I can
that might resemble
the thought of you
the depth of your eyes
or the sound of your name



AP: Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on August 7, 2022 for contest 2022 POETRY MARATHON ON MILE 11 sponsored by MARK TONEY  -  RANKED 10TH

feelingslonginglovewordsfree verse

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Susan Ashley

August 14, 2022 at 11:45 AM

Dear Line, the wistful poignancy of your poem is potent and hauntingly beautiful, yet the pain bared isn't diminished by the beauty but rather is felt more deeply and intimately by the reader, such is the gift of your exquisite heartfelt pen. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich

August 14, 2022 at 11:19 AM

So powerful, Line. you have channeled your grief into some very beautiful poems! Congrats in this latest marathon contest.

Mark Toney

August 12, 2022 at 2:05 PM

Line, from my perspective you effectively relate how thoughts of disappointment can plague us "Late at Night". Especially gripping is the image evoked in the second stanza. I also love the earnest effort displayed in trying to strengthen the memory of our loved ones. Congratulations on your win on Mile 11 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 12 has already started!