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late

Evening was upon us and we were running late.
Our reservation at the Hôtel de Paris Saint-Tropez,
was for 9:15 pm. 

Be not careless with time
for you will be judged.

My favorite garms for Héraclée eveningwear, are 
a sleeveless white linen tee-shirt over linen shorts.
That works perfectly well in the bars and dance clubs 
but not the luxe, formally inclined, la-tee-da Hôtel de Paris. 

Let custom serve reason, not smother it,
Let obedience not be given to feed another’s pride.

We had rushed from a kite show on the beach.
We were eyed and side eyed - like sketch vagrants -
but not denied a table off front-of-house eye-lines.

You can’t look askance at beachwear, on a Riviera, 
in a beach town. I was honestly dressed for vacation moments.

later..
I was dropped into a conversation
with a guy in a bar Peter and I were at.

When talking to rando guys in bars
I give them one of my more boring, 
backup personalities.

Anyway, this guy was saying that
dating is now a “rich person’s game.”

I get it, things are bad all over, but here
he is, in the Saint-Tropez Lounge Club,
buying ‘Pornstar Martinis’ at €22 a pop.

Isn’t he actively funding his problem?

Couldn’t he bring a date and buy twice
as many basic martinis at €10? 

In the dating market, we all hope to be chosen.

Status anxieties often speak for themselves.
In courting, glitter isn’t always persuasive.

When I met Peter, he was a penniless doctoral student,
existing on a meager stipend and part time jobs. 

When in doubt, try authenticity or charm, 
both are stylish coping mechanisms.
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Songs for this:
Someday, Someway by Marshall Crenshaw
Silver Heels by Fleetwood Mac
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