Last Year's Swimsuit

I tried to squeeze into last year’s swimsuit,
I thought was rather dainty and cute.
I pulled it passed my thighs,
ignored my bulging eyes,
as my bottom gave a big salute.

Copyright © 2010  By Caryl S. Muzzey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 5/27/2010 11:42:00 AM
Congrats on your HM in the contest. Dan C
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Date: 5/26/2010 6:03:00 PM
Congratulations Caryl on your success in the contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/26/2010 12:54:00 PM
Congrats Caryl on your HM in the Bulge contest with this great write ... enjoy your honor .. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 5/25/2010 8:18:00 PM
lol, this had me grinning, Caryl :) I wish you all the best in the contest :)
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Date: 5/24/2010 11:54:00 PM
lol.ouch, a wee bit embarassing eh. funny, you did well. goof luck to you as well.. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 5/24/2010 10:09:00 AM
Great fun, gave me a smile. Good Luck in the contest.
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Date: 5/23/2010 10:54:00 PM
I'm with Ralph on this one, Bathing suits do shrink out of season. :) :) good one Caryl. ...cheers Margaret
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Date: 5/23/2010 8:35:00 PM
Funny how last years suits seem to shrink. Don't know what causes it? However best of luck in the contest. Thanks for your comment. xxx Ralph
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Date: 5/23/2010 6:55:00 PM
Nice salute to a fun contest,Caryl. I wish you the best of luck. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/23/2010 3:49:00 PM
haha, what a picture, a butt salute!! CUte one, Caryl.
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Date: 5/23/2010 3:45:00 PM
made me laugh, good luck
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Date: 5/23/2010 2:05:00 PM
lol, love it, ha, this has smiles all over the entry, good luck,..p..d
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