Last Year's Swimsuit

I tried to squeeze into last year’s swimsuit,
I thought was rather dainty and cute.
I pulled it passed my thighs,
ignored my bulging eyes,
as my bottom gave a big salute.

Copyright © 2010  By Caryl S. Muzzey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Cwiak Avatar
May 27, 2010 at 11:42 AM
Congrats on your HM in the contest. Dan C
Freeman Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 6:03 PM
Congratulations Caryl on your success in the contest. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 12:54 PM
Congrats Caryl on your HM in the Bulge contest with this great write ... enjoy your honor .. luv.. Linda-Marie..
K. Avatar
May 25, 2010 at 8:18 PM
lol, this had me grinning, Caryl :) I wish you all the best in the contest :)
Chachere Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 11:54 PM
lol.ouch, a wee bit embarassing eh. funny, you did well. goof luck to you as well.. -Always&Forever Lynette
Tideswell Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 10:09 AM
Great fun, gave me a smile. Good Luck in the contest.
Foster Avatar
May 23, 2010 at 10:54 PM
I'm with Ralph on this one, Bathing suits do shrink out of season. :) :) good one Caryl. ...cheers Margaret
Taylor Avatar
May 23, 2010 at 8:35 PM
Funny how last years suits seem to shrink. Don't know what causes it? However best of luck in the contest. Thanks for your comment. xxx Ralph
Freeman Avatar
May 23, 2010 at 6:55 PM
Nice salute to a fun contest,Caryl. I wish you the best of luck. Agape, Moses
Dietrich Avatar
May 23, 2010 at 3:49 PM
haha, what a picture, a butt salute!! CUte one, Caryl.
Roberts Avatar
May 23, 2010 at 3:45 PM
made me laugh, good luck
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May 23, 2010 at 2:05 PM
lol, love it, ha, this has smiles all over the entry, good luck,..p..d
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