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Last Wish of the Rooted In Earth

Take my life, O Lord, but don't take 
"My Life". Delete not my knowledge, my 
memories--let not darkness, that moonless 
landscape of Nothing reign sovereign.  
Remember how you decorated
our skies with constellations and scepters,
with scintillations of crystal and smoke.
Leave me those I loved, and who loved 
me in this barely discernible dimension 
we lived in: time and space believed-in
absolutely, gloriously, in creation of sons,
soul-mates who found us desirable 
above others. Thank you for the passion 
of the bed, the passion of the breath-- 
how we knew you before you knew us, 
before you fashioned us through 
the coupling of the chosen, Heaven, 
our voyeur, our vision of confirmation, 
our co-creator with the lips and loins 
that in circuity, sweat, and heat 
of pairing brought us back 
to your presence: Blessed be 
your Holy Name.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Dietrich Avatar
December 10, 2011 at 10:28 PM
wow, this is so earthy and unique in its expression of prayer. Glad to see this one ,and thanks for writing me today!
Brown Avatar
August 18, 2009 at 6:38 AM
Nola, thank you for sharing your excellent poetry this morning. Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
August 17, 2009 at 6:47 PM
A very meaningful write, I certainly enjoyed reading, Sincerely, Moses
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