sara Etgen-Baker Poet Free verse

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LAST WHISPERS

LAST WHISPERS
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In the fading light of a Texas sunset,
the Texas windmill stands,
a sentry of rust and memory,
its blades stretching wide,
catching the last whispers of the day.

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Sotto Poet August 15, 2025 at 2:49 AM The gentle whisper of a Texas breeze seemed to dance through the words as I read. What a tranquil, gentle scene to close the day’s weary eye. Exquisitely crafted, dear Sara! sara Etgen-Baker August 15, 2025 at 5:50 PM thank you, Sotto! I'm grateful you felt the Texas breeze dancing through the poem's words. Those Texas windmills do offer such serenity at the end of the day. Thanks for your kind and complimentary words, hugs from Texas, Sara

Rowena Velasco August 14, 2025 at 11:02 PM Sara, I could almost feel that Texas breeze while reading this. Such a peaceful, lovely image to end the day with. Beautifully done! sara Etgen-Baker August 15, 2025 at 5:49 PM aww, your words mean a great deal to me. Something about those Texas windmills I find soothing. Thanks for your kind and complimentary words about my poem. Appreciate you beyond words, hugs, Sara

Paige Hind August 14, 2025 at 6:45 PM Lovely! :) sara Etgen-Baker August 15, 2025 at 5:47 PM thank you, sweet Paige!