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Last Sunset Over Pebble Beach

i went to pebble beach
where we first met
sat and waited
for the sun to set

tossed a pebble
as far as i could see
and hoped somehow
that you'd remember me



AP: 2nd place 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Wolf Avatar
May 7, 2022 at 8:19 PM
Sweet nostalgia. Deep waters. Thanks, Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
May 8, 2022 at 8:24 AM
Thanks, Gershon. Much appreciated ~
Rodrigues Avatar
May 3, 2022 at 12:04 PM
To wait and see, to hope, to remember the dream, a lovely poem!
Gauthier Avatar
May 3, 2022 at 2:15 PM
Thanks, Kim. Much appreciated ~
Bauer Avatar
May 3, 2022 at 11:50 AM
short and sweet and very lovely, line!
Gauthier Avatar
May 3, 2022 at 2:15 PM
Thanks, Ilene. Much appreciated ~
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