Last Seconds of the Last Hour

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Drowned with problems
Murdered by desolation
Killed by boredom
I am seeking for you.

Stabbed by the truth
Hit by bullets of gossips
Beat by the lightning of crimes
I am seeking for my lifeless life.

Raped by disappointments
Suppressed in demoralization
Cloaked in my long suffrage
I am seeking for my evil vengeance.

Blinded by your love
Deafen by my limitless delusions
Paralyzed by agony and physicality
I am seeking for my triumphant victory.

Fired by demonic sins
Frozen by world so ever-changing
Burned by the fire of hell
I know there's no way for me to get well.

Now, crying at the cornerless room
Living with my idiosyncrasy
Breathing with suffocation
Just wishing to end my senseless life!
" MY LAST HOUR " is now ceasing. . .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 8/15/2011 2:06:00 PM
Many congratulations on all your wins, Junjun: )
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Date: 8/15/2011 10:12:00 AM
wow. i feel so awful for this person. the deep emotions really come through in this poem, especially the hopelessness in the end. i hope this is not about you. congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/15/2011 9:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Robb's contest Jun-Jun. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/15/2011 1:25:00 AM
LVery creative and emotional . congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/14/2011 11:15:00 PM
congrats jun=jun on a special win in last hour contest luv.. tremendous piece..
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Date: 6/3/2011 6:26:00 AM
Excellent write here jun-jun...Congrats on your win..
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Date: 6/3/2011 5:15:00 AM
My Congratulations on the win in the contest of kristen, jun-jun
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Date: 6/3/2011 4:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Kristen's contest Jun-Jun. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/2/2011 9:12:00 PM
congrats jun-jun on your wonderful win with this amazing entry luv.. awesome ..enjoy .luv..
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Date: 5/25/2011 3:30:00 AM
Really good concerning the love thing, Jun-jun.
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