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Last Night's Storm

The storm of last night brought cool air Tree frogs have much news now to share Perfect weather for their rainwear Clouds everywhere, clouds everywhere Fog in the hollow tops the creek This gift of gray clouds' cool not bleak Sheer shawl fog adds its mystique Veils of Batik, veils of Batik The roosters in the hollow sing Chorus of anthemns loudly ring Air holds song accelerating God conducting, God conducting

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Bl Devnath

Date: 7/7/2013 8:42:00 AM

A beautiful imagery piece nicely penned. Loved always, my sweet friend, bl

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 7/7/2013 7:18:00 AM

I really love the flow and energy I feel in this one Sara.You've done a great job.

Manel Gunatillake

Date: 7/6/2013 10:58:00 PM

I enjoyed very much. this form must be difficult to maintain the rhyme, I guess. You have done it very well.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/6/2013 12:30:00 PM

Love the musical flow of this read, sara... glad the storm ended bringing you peace and dleight... fantastic monotetra!..:) huggs

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/6/2013 12:14:00 PM

Beautiful work Sara...I love this new form..and you did a great job with it.BG

John Posey

Date: 7/6/2013 10:07:00 AM

Sara, I am reminded that there is no feeling like that of the safety found after a storm. I've been through a few (Carla and Celia, to name two). You have captured that feeling very well..... Jake

Seosamh De Burca

Date: 7/6/2013 9:40:00 AM

You have captured the essence of the scene so well in your poem. A delight to read and savour.

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/6/2013 5:56:00 AM

You are doing awesomely with these monotetra's Sara! I'm enjoying them immensely! I need to try one again and post it! I'll try and do one again within the next few days, but it seems that I may not post it right away, I'm about 2 months behind in my postings, this is mainly because of the challenges of the contests! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this morning! What a intriguing and sentimental piece! I just love a poem about a storm or post storm, I just love it, Great Work!!