Last Night I Saw An Angel

Last night I saw an angel, he was sitting on my bed
He had two golden wings, and a halo round his head
Suddenly his shining light began to grow quite dim
It seemed a bit unusual and so I says to him
“I see your light is fading, is the reason for it that
You have a bad connection, are the batteries going flat?”
He said “this never happens, it is very very odd
It’s my communicator and it links me straight to God”
Cut off from his guv’ner he was free from prying eyes
He smiled a little smile and then, much to my surprise
Reached into the fridge and poured himself an ice cold drink
Then he lit a cigarette, and he removed the holy link
His wings had started moulting shedding feathers on the floor
Slowly getting smaller till at last they were no more
All at once it dawned on me, I quickly realised
No more was he an angel, he had just been mortalised
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
August 17, 2010 at 6:52 AM
Just stopping by to remind you of my newest contest The Birds And The Bees. I hope you will enter the contest if you haven't already John. Thank you if you have already entered or plan on entering. Love, Carol
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August 6, 2010 at 7:24 AM
Many congratulations John on your win in Carol's fine contest >> James
Mehta Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 5:36 PM
Congrats on the win, John
Freeman Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 5:10 PM
John, Congratulations on your success in the contest. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 2:05 PM
Congrats John on your winning poem in Carol's contest with this wonderful write and win to enjoy today with luv..
Brown Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 1:29 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest John. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
August 2, 2010 at 5:13 PM
A nice fantasy write on angel well penned
Kendrick Avatar
August 2, 2010 at 5:05 PM
Well, could go several ways with one..Good write..Sara
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