Last Night

eye gazes tender taunting glint, my heart beat skips strokes each dear finger universe slows for our love undressed my smile with moist kiss Poetry Contest: Tanka 3 Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich

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Paul Callus

Date: 3/26/2015 2:53:00 PM

This is very romantic, Kimberly, especially the final line. Good luck in the contest. // paul

Kim Shaw
Date: 3/26/2015 3:42:00 PM

Hi Paul! Thank you for stopping by and reading my tanka, and for the good luck! Hugs, Kimberly

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/25/2015 9:19:00 PM

Wonderful lines of romance, Kimberly! Hugs, Rhonda

Kim Shaw
Date: 3/26/2015 9:37:00 AM

Hi Rhonda! Thank you for the kind comment and sending warm hugs back to you! Kimberly

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 3/25/2015 5:30:00 AM

Wow Kimberly! The last two lines got me smiling. Very nice. Best wishes in the contest.

Kim Shaw
Date: 3/25/2015 8:28:00 AM

Hi Njeri! Thank you for the kind remarks and the wishes! Have a blessed day! Hugs, Kimberly

Joseph May

Date: 3/24/2015 10:00:00 PM

Very nicely penned Kimberly...best wishes

Kim Shaw
Date: 3/24/2015 10:34:00 PM

Thank you so much for the encouragement and kind wishes, Joseph. Hugs, Kimberly