Kim Shaw Poet Tanka

Last Night

eye gazes tender

taunting glint, my heart beat skips

strokes each dear finger

universe slows for our love

undressed my smile with moist kiss





Poetry Contest:  Tanka 3
Sponsor:   Andrea Dietrich

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Paul Callus March 26, 2015 at 2:53 PM This is very romantic, Kimberly, especially the final line. Good luck in the contest. // paul Kim Shaw March 26, 2015 at 3:42 PM Hi Paul! Thank you for stopping by and reading my tanka, and for the good luck! Hugs, Kimberly

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 25, 2015 at 9:19 PM Wonderful lines of romance, Kimberly! Hugs, Rhonda Kim Shaw March 26, 2015 at 9:37 AM Hi Rhonda! Thank you for the kind comment and sending warm hugs back to you! Kimberly

Njeri Hunjeri March 25, 2015 at 5:30 AM Wow Kimberly! The last two lines got me smiling. Very nice. Best wishes in the contest. Kim Shaw March 25, 2015 at 8:28 AM Hi Njeri! Thank you for the kind remarks and the wishes! Have a blessed day! Hugs, Kimberly

Joseph May March 24, 2015 at 10:00 PM Very nicely penned Kimberly...best wishes Kim Shaw March 24, 2015 at 10:34 PM Thank you so much for the encouragement and kind wishes, Joseph. Hugs, Kimberly