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Last Night

Sleek with a thick physique,
intrigued by her mystique.
Cherry red cheeks,
meek,
this caramel freak,
rested underneath
my satin sheets.


Jared Pickett	
8/4/2010
Asavvy1

lifefree verse

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Date: 9/4/2010 1:10:00 PM

My favorite guy and poet...Sorry this wasn't me...ILY...love Scarlett

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 9/2/2010 8:29:00 AM

Soup Mail

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/31/2010 12:10:00 PM

Hey u big handsome hunk of poet... my wedding photos are now posted on my blog.. check them out and see the "Sweetheart" in all her glory..luv.. and the groom isn't too bad either..haha.. enjoy..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/29/2010 12:36:00 PM

Very passionate write, Jared. I gave the pantoum a shot. It was hard and took a long time, but I did enjoy working with the form after I got into it. Thanks for introducing this form to me. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/26/2010 11:43:00 AM

Just saw yur new contest posted Jared.. the 35 max is the required number now but since u posted it today, Aug. 26th it has to run till Sept. 26th according to the NEW rules on Poetry Soup.. the Staff asked all sponsors to change their deadline dates last week... look on the blogs for their blog and read it.. u will see the changes ..or else u will have problems finalizing as five poets have had just last week... will try to give u a super entry luv.. am airborne right now..

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/20/2010 9:29:00 AM

Very nice Jared. I sent you soup mail. Joyce

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 8/13/2010 8:46:00 AM

Why don't you ever do some slam man???

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/6/2010 12:36:00 PM

Interesting..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/5/2010 6:50:00 PM

Appreciate your well wishes for my big day on the 22nd.. and far ar the 'honey poo' he's been having a honeymoon for the past twenty years..luv.. it just kicked in he needed to keep it all for his own.. MEN... better late than never I guess..luv.. check out all my blog photos from our vaca in Hawaii and Jersey shore... and my sons and the dogs..luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/4/2010 6:32:00 PM

and...... is the continuation forthcoming>>||??? haha.. just joking now.. sounds like one of my nights ages ago.. with the male species... now I have to be faithful...imagine that? think its possible? its up for debate ..haha..with luv..