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Last Night

The wind roars obliterating angel voices showing me the way, the only way, the gospel way trees bent and broken hurled like dust in a desert storm a sword dance I take the chance and pray the angel voices messaging the wilderness prevail at last against the howling prowling creatures of this deafening windswept wild and unforgiving night

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Date: 2/1/2024 2:16:00 PM
What great atmosphere your words create here. I can imagine the strength of the winds where you are. The power of prayer and mother nature are beautifully described. I just love how you ended this free verse "of this deafening windswept wild and unforgiving night" Cheers - Gary
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Date: 1/24/2024 6:29:00 AM
Sounds like a rough night but ultimately victorious Peter
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Peter Rees
Date: 1/24/2024 6:36:00 AM
Yes indeed Tom, but now the sun is shining. Many thanks for your comment.

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