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Last Meow

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In your last meow, I held you right on my heart; then- then you left me . . . I held you till you were stone, and I had to let you go. ____________________ July 8, 2018 Poetry/Tanka/Last Meow Copyright Protected, ID 18-1040-162-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Valerie Staton
Date: 1/27/2019 7:19:00 AM
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Very well written!
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Constance La France
Date: 1/27/2019 11:38:00 AM
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Valerie, thank you. I lost my old cat Smudges to death in June 2018. She died at home in my arms and I did hold her till she was stone. She loved the garden. How long will I weep for her? . . . Forever ! Thanks for the compliment !
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Jack Horne
Date: 7/26/2018 11:21:00 AM
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heartbreaking, but beautiful, my friend. she's at peace now xx
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Constance La France
Date: 1/27/2019 11:39:00 AM
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Thank you Jack
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Warren Doll
Date: 7/10/2018 1:55:00 PM
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So touched with love and grief. Well done, Broken Wings-Dear Heart. Going into my Fav. Poems. // Warren
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Constance La France
Date: 1/27/2019 11:40:00 AM
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Thanks Warren for the FAV !
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Lyric Man
Date: 7/8/2018 9:40:00 PM
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That was pure delight!!
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Constance La France
Date: 1/27/2019 11:40:00 AM
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Lyric, thanks for visiting !
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/8/2018 8:36:00 PM
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Love your tanka, sweetie, this so shows your love for the one you loved so...
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Constance La France
Date: 1/27/2019 11:41:00 AM
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Thanks Eve, I did love her !
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/8/2018 4:28:00 PM
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soupmail
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/8/2018 4:19:00 PM
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oh my, this is so utterly beautiful and sad. FAVE.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/27/2019 11:41:00 AM
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Andrea, thanks for the FAV!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/8/2018 12:12:00 PM
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Hello Broken Wings your Tanka is so sad. i do hope you get another cat.have a nice day my friend.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/27/2019 11:41:00 AM
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Darlene, thank you and I did !
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/8/2018 11:55:00 AM
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aww Constance I have tears my friend and the pic is so wonderful:-) hugs jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 1/27/2019 11:42:00 AM
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Jan, thanks, you know how much I loved that old cat !

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