Last Memories of a Warrior

Aging jagged skin gave him depth in perceiving eyes
Ridged hands defined he was a man of work
Seldom had he spoken and when he did he uttered wisdom 
He smelled a storm from a thousand miles away 
He peacefully sat on the withered porch gently swaying in his wooden chair
Played melodic tunes of his blues harp which complemented sounds of the tempest
He was a man of time

Mistakenly I witnessed him at an undisturbed time of vulnerability 
Tears flowed from his enlightened eyes dampening the tobacco stained shirt
Mesmerized of sorrow I was seized by an inescapable plague of tears
tears halted of time

Minutes later he entered, 
Hands of labor, body of strength, and eyes of wisdom, 
What’s wrong he asked, I had no answered
I didn’t know shrugging my shoulders
He knelled down on aching joints
Wisdom whispered from his lips to my ears for the last time
“Even Warriors cry James”
“Even Warriors cry”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Golden Avatar
January 27, 2009 at 7:40 PM
I love the tender picture you paint, here. Well done, James. Donna G.
Joe Avatar
January 2, 2009 at 11:19 AM
A great piece of portrait poetry. The language of the narrative really drives this poem. 'Ridged hands defined he was a man of work' and 'He smelled a storm from a thousand miles away' are just a couple of example of how good the line structure of this poem is and how the word shape the tone both visual and aural.
Wiggins Avatar
December 31, 2008 at 8:47 PM
Deep..left me speechless...great work!! *Breana
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