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Last Lust Lorn Lament

i'm abandoning
                                abandon

  
                        it's left me nowhere 

                  
                             



24/06/18

Brenda Chiri's 
Abandon 2 - Poetry Contest

Copyright © Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart | Year Posted 2018

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Susan Gentry Date: 7/27/2018 6:03:00 PM Congratulations on your win. Brilliant! Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 7/27/2018 9:31:00 PM Thank you Susan! :)) xomo!

Eve Roper Date: 7/27/2018 5:56:00 PM Congratulations on your heartfelt win, Maureen . I enjoyed reading this well written Senryu with great imagery. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 7/27/2018 9:30:00 PM Thank you Eve, I enjoyed this one in particular ;p Hugs! xomo

Sandra Haight Date: 7/25/2018 4:54:00 PM Wow...very clever, Maureen. So much in so few words! Congratulations on your 1st Place win. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 7/26/2018 7:37:00 AM Thank you Sandra! :)) xomo!

Richard Lamoureux Date: 7/25/2018 8:53:00 AM Clever, congrats on top spot. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 7/25/2018 9:49:00 AM Thank you Richard :) xomo!

John Lawless Date: 7/25/2018 7:20:00 AM Just don't be reckless about it.... Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 7/25/2018 7:40:00 AM You get giggles galore for that one! ;p xomo!

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 7/25/2018 5:07:00 AM I don't no how are you come up with these brief but incredible poems Mo. But keep it up! I loved this! Congratulations on your first place win! : ) Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 7/25/2018 7:39:00 AM I couldn't say, just that my brain works that way ;) Thank you so much Connie! Your encouragement and support a blessing cherished always <3 xomo!

Roy Pett Date: 6/28/2018 5:34:00 AM You will always be somewhere, because you are in our hearts and minds, brilliant brilliant senryu Maureen. :)) Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 6/28/2018 6:20:00 AM Well that puts this grey overcast day in warm new light, so sweet to say, thank you Roy. xomo ~<3

Charlie Smith Date: 6/26/2018 11:58:00 AM Love it Maureen... Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 6/26/2018 1:39:00 PM Thank you Charlie :) xomo!

Arturo Michael Date: 6/25/2018 9:39:00 PM Where is that???... About time...All the best Maureen Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 6/26/2018 7:16:00 AM Giggles ;) A lovely day to my friend! xomo

Eve Roper Date: 6/25/2018 8:26:00 PM Oh, very profound, Maureen, :) hugs eve Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 6/26/2018 7:15:00 AM Thank you Eve! :) xomo!

Agnes Krampe Date: 6/25/2018 6:50:00 PM very clever, Maureen Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 6/26/2018 7:15:00 AM Thank you Agnes :)) xomo!

Gershon Wolf Date: 6/25/2018 5:20:00 PM Ditto Silent One's comment --- from a Real Nowhere Man, sitting in his nowhere land... Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 6/26/2018 7:14:00 AM Saving all your nowhere plans, for nobody huh? Have you seen a Jim Jarmusch film called Dead Man? Two main characters are "William Blake" and "Nobody" ;) xomo!

Silent One Date: 6/25/2018 8:32:00 AM Clever... but at least nowhere is somewhere... Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 6/25/2018 8:36:00 AM Lol! Too true ;p xomo!

Caren Krutsinger Date: 6/25/2018 6:55:00 AM Love this one. Went straight to my faves list. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 6/25/2018 7:53:00 AM Delighted! Thank you so much Caren! :) xomo!

Anil Deo Date: 6/25/2018 6:44:00 AM Intriguing. You do seem to be having fun with poetry ... Hallelujah. shalom, shalom Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 6/25/2018 7:52:00 AM I do have maybe a little too much fun with words, amen for poetry! Thank you Anil, shalom :) xomo

Lyric Man Date: 6/25/2018 5:42:00 AM Maureen.. it's rare when brilliance and humor wed. However, you just pulled it off!! Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 6/25/2018 6:17:00 AM Thank you Lyric Man! I'm never quite sure where I'm landing on the cheese/whiz scale ;) xomo!

Mick Talbot Date: 6/25/2018 5:40:00 AM You have company! Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 6/25/2018 6:17:00 AM Never too young to give up ;p xomo!