Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Poet Senryu

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MagiCicada 13

Last Lust Lorn Lament

i'm abandoning
                                abandon

  
                        it's left me nowhere 

                  
                             



24/06/18

Brenda Chiri's 
Abandon 2 - Poetry Contest

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Susan Gentry July 27, 2018 at 6:03 PM Congratulations on your win. Brilliant! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 27, 2018 at 9:31 PM Thank you Susan! :)) xomo!

Eve Roper July 27, 2018 at 5:56 PM Congratulations on your heartfelt win, Maureen . I enjoyed reading this well written Senryu with great imagery. Hugs Eve Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 27, 2018 at 9:30 PM Thank you Eve, I enjoyed this one in particular ;p Hugs! xomo

Sandra Haight July 25, 2018 at 4:54 PM Wow...very clever, Maureen. So much in so few words! Congratulations on your 1st Place win. Hugs, Sandra Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 26, 2018 at 7:37 AM Thank you Sandra! :)) xomo!

Richard Lamoureux July 25, 2018 at 8:53 AM Clever, congrats on top spot. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 25, 2018 at 9:49 AM Thank you Richard :) xomo!

John Lawless July 25, 2018 at 7:20 AM Just don't be reckless about it.... Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 25, 2018 at 7:40 AM You get giggles galore for that one! ;p xomo!

Connie Marcum Wong July 25, 2018 at 5:07 AM I don't no how are you come up with these brief but incredible poems Mo. But keep it up! I loved this! Congratulations on your first place win! : ) Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 25, 2018 at 7:39 AM I couldn't say, just that my brain works that way ;) Thank you so much Connie! Your encouragement and support a blessing cherished always <3 xomo!

Roy Pett June 28, 2018 at 5:34 AM You will always be somewhere, because you are in our hearts and minds, brilliant brilliant senryu Maureen. :)) Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 28, 2018 at 6:20 AM Well that puts this grey overcast day in warm new light, so sweet to say, thank you Roy. xomo ~<3

Charlie Smith June 26, 2018 at 11:58 AM Love it Maureen... Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 26, 2018 at 1:39 PM Thank you Charlie :) xomo!

Arturo Michael June 25, 2018 at 9:39 PM Where is that???... About time...All the best Maureen Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 26, 2018 at 7:16 AM Giggles ;) A lovely day to my friend! xomo

Eve Roper June 25, 2018 at 8:26 PM Oh, very profound, Maureen, :) hugs eve Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 26, 2018 at 7:15 AM Thank you Eve! :) xomo!

Agnes Krampe June 25, 2018 at 6:50 PM very clever, Maureen Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 26, 2018 at 7:15 AM Thank you Agnes :)) xomo!

Gershon Wolf June 25, 2018 at 5:20 PM Ditto Silent One's comment --- from a Real Nowhere Man, sitting in his nowhere land... Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 26, 2018 at 7:14 AM Saving all your nowhere plans, for nobody huh? Have you seen a Jim Jarmusch film called Dead Man? Two main characters are "William Blake" and "Nobody" ;) xomo!

Silent One June 25, 2018 at 8:32 AM Clever... but at least nowhere is somewhere... Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 25, 2018 at 8:36 AM Lol! Too true ;p xomo!

Caren Krutsinger June 25, 2018 at 6:55 AM Love this one. Went straight to my faves list. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 25, 2018 at 7:53 AM Delighted! Thank you so much Caren! :) xomo!

Anil Deo June 25, 2018 at 6:44 AM Intriguing. You do seem to be having fun with poetry ... Hallelujah. shalom, shalom Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 25, 2018 at 7:52 AM I do have maybe a little too much fun with words, amen for poetry! Thank you Anil, shalom :) xomo

Lyric Man June 25, 2018 at 5:42 AM Maureen.. it's rare when brilliance and humor wed. However, you just pulled it off!! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 25, 2018 at 6:17 AM Thank you Lyric Man! I'm never quite sure where I'm landing on the cheese/whiz scale ;) xomo!

Mick Talbot June 25, 2018 at 5:40 AM You have company! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 25, 2018 at 6:17 AM Never too young to give up ;p xomo!