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Graceful, tall grasses A raspberry sun peers through from the purple sky steps ahead of tomorrow to nature's joy and sorrow. Burgundy fever smoking beautiful colors when shadows run wild! Must get one more glimpse of red 'ere sweet dreams enter my head.

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Date: 8/31/2024 3:34:00 PM
I love this tanka. I enjoy those burgundy colors in nature.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/31/2024 8:53:00 PM
Your words are heartwarming, Hilda. Thank you.
Date: 8/30/2024 7:30:00 AM
Graceful is the key to your gem of a poem. Such beauty that astounds. Wonderful.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/30/2024 9:25:00 PM
Your warm, gracious words are so much appreciated, my friend. Deepest thanks.
Date: 8/30/2024 6:04:00 AM
Can't blame you for wanting one last glimpse. Nature can teach us so much, if we let it. You make these so appealing evelyn
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/30/2024 9:18:00 PM
Thank you very much, Tom. Your appreciation is a delight. Blessings.
Date: 8/29/2024 8:58:00 AM
Dear evelyn, you are one of my fave poets on soup! And for this very reason, because of how elegantly and beautifully you weave imagery using colors .. so stunning how you pair words too! Just gorgeous, double tanka! I especially love “burgundy fever” “smoking beautiful colors” wow this definitely Is a fave! Sending you light always
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/29/2024 3:44:00 PM
My smiles will linger, long after reading your lovely remarks, dear Ink. Your admiration for my work is quite mutual. I've gotten tears in my eyes, while reading the beautiful imagery you always employ. I'm so glad you liked this poem. Thank you for your kind thoughts and your fave. Blessings.
Date: 8/29/2024 4:42:00 AM
A descriptive pair of tankas. Sunrises and sunsets are so wonderful. I don't get to see sunsets very often. Thanks for sharing yours with us. Sara K
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/29/2024 3:31:00 PM
You're so very welcome, Sara. I'm so delighted that you enjoyed these tanka. Blessings.
Date: 8/28/2024 1:33:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your colorful "Last Look write. Have a blessed day writing away.............
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/28/2024 4:26:00 PM
Thank you for the distinct pleasure of your comment, Paula. Hope your day is blessed, too.

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