Last Laugh

They laugh under their sleeves,
as they destroy you,
trumpling you on the ground
like dirt. They laugh visibly
because they think
it doesn't make a difference
if you know their schemes
or not,
for your life is in the balance.

They scorn you
when it starts raining;
the dirt on your clothes
and skin turn to mud.

"The gods have forsaken you!"
they shout.

Little do they know the rains
are fuelling your inner spark,
that has always been with you.

Slowly rise
like a phoenix from the ashes,
as the rains clean your
body and clothes.

The rains turn the ground
to a flood. You levitate.
They drown,
as they look at you with shameful
eyes.

You laugh last.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/25/2016 7:18:00 PM
Teddy-rising like a phoenix from the ashes-awesome line :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/26/2016 6:46:00 AM
Thank you so much Laura, for your warm applause!! *^_^*
Date: 9/24/2016 9:51:00 PM
Teddy, Congratulations on your well-deserved win. :):):) Stop by my latest blog "Last Laugh." if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/25/2016 3:58:00 AM
Thank you so much for your applause, Linda!! *^_^* <3 I'm deeply honored to see my poem's title as the title of your blog!! ;-)
Date: 5/9/2016 6:32:00 AM
Loved these lines, its a true message, don't be too quick to judge. A7
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/11/2016 6:06:00 AM
Thank you so much Lewis!! :-)
Date: 5/6/2016 7:50:00 PM
Wow, Teddy a very powerful one. LOVE how you illustrated one of my fave quotes He who laughs last laughs loudest. GREAT work. (and a fave)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/7/2016 4:01:00 AM
Wow! You faved it! :-o Thanks so much for enjoying my piece, Andrea!! *^_^*
Date: 5/6/2016 6:41:00 PM
a great read ,enjoyed this one, thank you for sharing ~~SKAT
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Date: 5/7/2016 3:58:00 AM
You are welcome Skat! *^_^* Thank you for enjoying it!
Date: 5/6/2016 5:45:00 AM
Good poem Teddy
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/6/2016 3:41:00 PM
Thank you so much Sello!! :-)
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