Last Hurrah

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Autumn brings colors to uplift "summer's soul"
"washing withered" greens with bright patina;
the eyesight delight which brightens and abets,
with "fiery fusion," new scenes old summer will accept-

highlights, imparted justly, as her season's last hurrah
while she leaves, bereaves her lost Xanadu,
in the brilliance of red/golds swirled with orange/amber,
crowning trees and carpeting sprawled bald lawns with cheer-
to "soften summer's" exit within "Autumn's arena"-
until she returns again- post next year's Spring Rebirth.


September 11, 2022

~1st Place~
Contest: The A's Have It
Sponsor: Joseph May
Judged: 10/02/2022

Theme/Title: Last Hurrah
Bold = Alphabetical order of 3 words
Quotes = Alliterations
Italics = Internal Rhyme
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Contest Rules:
2 or more lines with 3 words in alphabetical order. It can be 
more words but the minimum is 3 words.

3 or more lines with alliterations.

2 or more lines with internal rhymes (perfect rhymes)

Spell out a word with the last letters of each line, 
That word is your Title and your Theme

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Date: 10/5/2022 7:28:00 AM
Good one about the parting of fall with the hope of spring. Congratulations on this winner. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara
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Date: 10/2/2022 5:24:00 AM
An adieu to summer, Wonderful write Sandra, Congrats on your win
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Date: 9/15/2022 3:11:00 PM
This is excellently done Sandra, I can see you love Autumn too, take care, enjoy each day, as if it were your last :)
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