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Last Goodbye

The Highwaymen softly play
Me And Bobby Magee
And for the next four hours 
Every single drink is free.
Order what you like friend
And stick it on the slate
Tonight we’re saying goodbye
To my best and oldest mate.

On the bar in isolation stands
The Absent Friend’s Drink,
At the end of the night to be
Quickly poured down the sink.
Like every other human being
He was good and bad in parts
A fact that becomes apparent 
When the reminiscing starts.

A man of strong opinions 
Which he carried to the end
And we didn’t always agree
Me and this good old friend.
It was a friendship of honesty
We didn’t tell each other lies
We just agreed to differ and
Each learned to compromise.

From teenaged  Squaddies
To men of retirement age
We remained mates through
Every changing  life  stage.
Strong willed, as often
Wrong as he was right
He  never ever conceded
Without a spirited fight.

A mam of surprises
A man seemingly apart
But not far below the surface
One of good and kind  heart.
The free bar has  closed 
Heaven knows how big the slate
But we gave a fitting farewell 
To my much missed  old mate.

I’ve drunk so many pints as
This night draws to its end
But I’m stone cold sober 
As I think of my old friend
The Absent Friend’s Drink
Has been quietly poured away
Marking the official end of this
His wake and funeral day.

The music’s switched off. 
Now just a big empty room 
That, to quote the apt saying
Is almost silent as a tomb. 
One last look around to check
Then they switch off the light
And tired staff follow us out
Into the darkness of the night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 9/6/2023 1:56:00 PM
terry - this is heartbreaking but so beautifully written that it's impossible to read without understanding the depth of your feelings for this departed friend...
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Terry Ireland
Date: 9/7/2023 1:15:00 AM
thank you ilene - we have very few friendships in life like that one was. more that 50 years of fights, arguments, agreements, and scrapes.
Date: 9/6/2023 9:42:00 AM
I read other poets and enjoy their wonderful poems, and like them for the most part. Then I read one by a bloke named T. Ireland and it goes straight to my heart. There's no enigmatic words or phrases, or lines describing the moon, but reading your wonderful poems, I swear they make me swoon. Best poet on Soup by far. A Favourite.
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Terry Ireland
Date: 9/7/2023 1:14:00 AM
How very nice that you take the time to appraise my work in metered rhyme. I'm very careful with words i employ so that they enhance rather than destroy. Your kind support means so much to me, helps me let my thoughts run free.

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