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Last Gasp

, His thick bulky solid large hands enveloped her tumid staunch hot breasts Tenacious he was holding firmly as she to her shudder her tremble alas calm warmth last gasp

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/4/2012 5:29:00 PM
Doesn't sound like a last gasp to me, probably just getting going! Where do we go from here?
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Date: 3/26/2011 7:22:00 AM
ooowwww. I just loooove this one. Why so few reads for this one? The soup is missing out on your old writes poet. toodles, JS
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Date: 2/5/2010 6:23:00 PM
too hot for me. john
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Date: 1/31/2010 3:28:00 AM
This poem offers passion and comfort,,beautiful...Charmaine
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