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Last Gasp

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      His thick
        bulky
         solid 
    large hands
  enveloped her
        tumid 
      staunch
    hot breasts

Tenacious he was
  holding firmly
       as she
 to her shudder
   her tremble
         alas
  calm warmth

     last gasp

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Date: 1/4/2012 5:29:00 PM
Doesn't sound like a last gasp to me, probably just getting going! Where do we go from here?
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Date: 3/26/2011 7:22:00 AM
ooowwww. I just loooove this one. Why so few reads for this one? The soup is missing out on your old writes poet. toodles, JS
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Date: 2/5/2010 6:23:00 PM
too hot for me. john
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Date: 1/31/2010 3:28:00 AM
This poem offers passion and comfort,,beautiful...Charmaine
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