James Peranteau Poet Free verse

Last Gasp

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      His thick
        bulky
         solid 
    large hands
  enveloped her
        tumid 
      staunch
    hot breasts

Tenacious he was
  holding firmly
       as she
 to her shudder
   her tremble
         alas
  calm warmth

     last gasp

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Elizabeth Wesley January 4, 2012 at 5:29 PM Doesn't sound like a last gasp to me, probably just getting going! Where do we go from here?

Jslambert Mister Roboto March 26, 2011 at 7:22 AM ooowwww. I just loooove this one. Why so few reads for this one? The soup is missing out on your old writes poet. toodles, JS

John Loving Iii February 5, 2010 at 6:23 PM too hot for me. john

Charmaine Chircop January 31, 2010 at 3:28 AM This poem offers passion and comfort,,beautiful...Charmaine