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Last Detour

On this soft autumn evening all is still 
The moon drifts over clouds that gently flow
Bequeathing through us humbleness and thrill. 
To fade in its mild hour of afterglow.

And somehow I have thought about our dream
Where skies can look into my heart and  feel;
This vow of love will never die, but gleam 
Until life ends, embracing time’s ordeal.

Forever then we'll walk the endless strands 
That tugs along this sail , my river’s quest,
Where seagulls wheel above the pearly sands
Beyond the twirling curves far to the west.

Yes, love is ever faithful, always pure
Till heaven greets me in my last detour.


English Sonnet Contest of Janice Canerdy
11/3/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Lindley Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 10:59 PM
You my friend have just written a top level classic sonnet.. One that truly makes me wish I had authored, but such beauty I could not do. A solid 10 and adding this true jewel to my fav list.
Haight Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 6:41 PM
Nette, such beautiful emotions expressed about devoted and endless love in this lovely, peaceful Sonnet. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Lamoureux Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 9:15 AM
Lovely writing, congrats Nette!
Lawless Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 8:13 AM
Congrats Nette A beautiful ode to life's detour signs....
George   Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 7:30 PM
Very beautiful, Nette. Many congrats on your win. Lainey
Pennell  Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 6:51 PM
congrats on your deserved win stephen
Canerdy Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 6:03 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your win in my contest. Thanks for entering! Janice
Yvonne Avatar
November 3, 2016 at 8:01 AM
A wonderful English Sonnet. I hope you do really well in this contest nette. You are a great poet. Always impressed, lots of love, armand.
P  Avatar
November 3, 2016 at 3:30 AM
Captivating sonnet, love that first verse Nette, touching sentiment.
Vaso Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 11:06 PM
I have read so many lovely poems of autumn, and this is yet another spectacular one. I think someone must be putting something poetic in the wine these days!!! :) Hugs!
Godwin Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 9:32 PM
I read Iambic Pentameter one way for nostress/sress which sounds funny compared to my true/natural reading of it. This is lovely with full sails, Nette - captivating and touching ... CayCay
Muideen Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 3:45 PM
Wow! Wow! Wow! This is really great. You penned this so personate and promise. Well penned............A.M.
Smith Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 3:41 PM
Lovely write Nette, best wishes in the contest...
Turner Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 2:55 PM
You had me with the first line, nette. Beautiful sonnet of longing and hope. Delightful:)
Parker Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 2:28 PM
to walk with you on the gentle path of this poem was a joy..I can tell by your poems we both live near the sea..good luck my poetic friend
Green Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 1:27 PM
Another beautiful and captivating offering of thoughts and dreams Nette. So wonderfully expressed.
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