Last Cockcrow

i remember darkness
as it filled your eyes
with the umbrage of death

i never saw it scrolled
on the lace stitches of night
yet it was written there
perhaps it was all along
when one learns where to look

i should have known
it would be the last cockcrow
before winter's storm
the way you laid there torpid
like summer's sun beyond the horizon
when tossed about in the winds
of winter's frozen breath

maybe i would have seen it
if i weren't looking
through fogged-rims of dawn
that hand's of night had sewn
upon life's window

my tears fell like heaven's crystals
across newborn fields of white
as i heard the trumpet's blow
while death and i both pressed firmly
against your algid lips
but only silence kissed back
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Watt Avatar
February 13, 2020 at 4:57 PM
Sandra, congrats on your win for this powerful and wintry chill write of death. Stunning, as always ~ John
Adams Avatar
February 13, 2020 at 8:18 PM
Thank you so much John... hugs
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February 12, 2020 at 5:07 PM
Powerful my friend with too many strong images to mention just one! But I do love the last line of a kiss on the deceased lips! Impressive write, Sandra. Congrats and kudos.
Adams Avatar
February 12, 2020 at 8:40 PM
Thank you so much Sam... hugs
Green Avatar
February 12, 2020 at 4:51 PM
Wow, that was sad, beautifully written but oh so sad and lonely. Congrats on your win in this contest Sandy. All of your poetry is a winner to me.
Adams Avatar
February 12, 2020 at 8:39 PM
Thank you so much Chris... my sad writes are always my strongest ones...hugs
Kendrick Avatar
October 28, 2013 at 4:54 AM
Very expressive and descriptive work that you have penned..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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October 26, 2013 at 11:49 AM
Sandra, your poem is amazing... strong imagery... almost reminds me of kissing a passed dear loved one... enjoyed...LINDA
Adams Avatar
October 26, 2013 at 1:19 PM
that was the thought that the end line came from... the kiss on dead lips...you have good insight to see through the metaphors...hugs thank you ! :)
Dietrich Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 9:03 PM
Just cruising by here tonight to say hi. Joe was not home when I got back from the gym. I don't know where he went but i hope it's to collect money owed to him on a job he did a long time ago and never got paid for yet!!
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October 23, 2013 at 7:06 AM
- Sandra, deeply written - feel sadness and grief - a very well written poem (Life is not a bed of roses) - Have a beautiful day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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October 23, 2013 at 1:20 AM
Hi Sandra, A sensual write with deep passion.. Ken
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October 22, 2013 at 9:16 AM
wow, this is sure inspirational, in fact amazing poetry,, i also feel the Cockcrow, like Andrea as significant, and also have used it in poetry, but i take nothing away from you Sandra, this is something wonderful, i could go on and on, and bore you with accolade, but this poem sure moves me.,...
Adams Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 10:02 AM
Thank you for your sweet reply Harry...I felt that word would do well in the title...just seemed to fit this piece hugs :)
Dietrich Avatar
October 21, 2013 at 3:53 PM
sandra, you know how I love reading your poetry. Dark and yet beautiful at the same time. I love the word in your title. I used it a long time ago in a poem of mine.
Adams Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 10:01 AM
Thank you so much Andrea...I like that word myself :) hugs hope your day is good!
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October 21, 2013 at 11:33 AM
Wow Sandra, such poignant sadness. The last line just simply amazing. Very moving and deep
Adams Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 10:00 AM
Thank you Karen...hope your day is wonderful...hugs :)
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October 21, 2013 at 10:55 AM
Oh my! This is exceptional, your talent is such a gift. Well done Sandra, magic runs through your veins.
Adams Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 9:59 AM
Thank you for your kind words always Richard...hugs :)
Mcdaid Avatar
October 21, 2013 at 10:25 AM
deep beautifully penned
Adams Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 9:58 AM
thank you Liam :)
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October 21, 2013 at 10:14 AM
quietly deep and profound this is , sandra...and I was holding onto every word as " only silence kissed back.."... that did it!..:) huggs
Adams Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 9:58 AM
Thank you very much Nette...hope your day is good :) hugs
Mccall Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 8:08 PM
Deep and nicely penned.
Adams Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 8:37 PM
thank you Lisa :)
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