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Last Cockcrow

i remember darkness as it filled your eyes with the umbrage of death i never saw it scrolled on the lace stitches of night yet it was written there perhaps it was all along when one learns where to look i should have known it would be the last cockcrow before winter's storm the way you laid there torpid like summer's sun beyond the horizon when tossed about in the winds of winter's frozen breath maybe i would have seen it if i weren't looking through fogged-rims of dawn that hand's of night had sewn upon life's window my tears fell like heaven's crystals across newborn fields of white as i heard the trumpet's blow while death and i both pressed firmly against your algid lips but only silence kissed back

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/13/2020 4:57:00 PM
Sandra, congrats on your win for this powerful and wintry chill write of death. Stunning, as always ~ John
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/13/2020 8:18:00 PM
Thank you so much John... hugs
Date: 2/12/2020 5:07:00 PM
Powerful my friend with too many strong images to mention just one! But I do love the last line of a kiss on the deceased lips! Impressive write, Sandra. Congrats and kudos.
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Date: 2/12/2020 8:40:00 PM
Thank you so much Sam... hugs
Date: 2/12/2020 4:51:00 PM
Wow, that was sad, beautifully written but oh so sad and lonely. Congrats on your win in this contest Sandy. All of your poetry is a winner to me.
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Date: 2/12/2020 8:39:00 PM
Thank you so much Chris... my sad writes are always my strongest ones...hugs
Date: 10/28/2013 4:54:00 AM
Very expressive and descriptive work that you have penned..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 10/26/2013 11:49:00 AM
Sandra, your poem is amazing... strong imagery... almost reminds me of kissing a passed dear loved one... enjoyed...LINDA
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Date: 10/26/2013 1:19:00 PM
that was the thought that the end line came from... the kiss on dead lips...you have good insight to see through the metaphors...hugs thank you ! :)
Date: 10/23/2013 9:03:00 PM
Just cruising by here tonight to say hi. Joe was not home when I got back from the gym. I don't know where he went but i hope it's to collect money owed to him on a job he did a long time ago and never got paid for yet!!
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Date: 10/23/2013 7:06:00 AM
- Sandra, deeply written - feel sadness and grief - a very well written poem (Life is not a bed of roses) - Have a beautiful day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/23/2013 1:20:00 AM
Hi Sandra, A sensual write with deep passion.. Ken
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Date: 10/22/2013 9:16:00 AM
wow, this is sure inspirational, in fact amazing poetry,, i also feel the Cockcrow, like Andrea as significant, and also have used it in poetry, but i take nothing away from you Sandra, this is something wonderful, i could go on and on, and bore you with accolade, but this poem sure moves me.,...
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/22/2013 10:02:00 AM
Thank you for your sweet reply Harry...I felt that word would do well in the title...just seemed to fit this piece hugs :)
Date: 10/21/2013 3:53:00 PM
sandra, you know how I love reading your poetry. Dark and yet beautiful at the same time. I love the word in your title. I used it a long time ago in a poem of mine.
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Date: 10/22/2013 10:01:00 AM
Thank you so much Andrea...I like that word myself :) hugs hope your day is good!
Date: 10/21/2013 11:33:00 AM
Wow Sandra, such poignant sadness. The last line just simply amazing. Very moving and deep
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/22/2013 10:00:00 AM
Thank you Karen...hope your day is wonderful...hugs :)
Date: 10/21/2013 10:55:00 AM
Oh my! This is exceptional, your talent is such a gift. Well done Sandra, magic runs through your veins.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/22/2013 9:59:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words always Richard...hugs :)
Date: 10/21/2013 10:25:00 AM
deep beautifully penned
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/22/2013 9:58:00 AM
thank you Liam :)
Date: 10/21/2013 10:14:00 AM
quietly deep and profound this is , sandra...and I was holding onto every word as " only silence kissed back.."... that did it!..:) huggs
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Date: 10/22/2013 9:58:00 AM
Thank you very much Nette...hope your day is good :) hugs
Date: 10/20/2013 8:08:00 PM
Deep and nicely penned.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/20/2013 8:37:00 PM
thank you Lisa :)

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