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Premiere Contest WinnerLast Call To War

Behold thee men of Castle Ballyclogh!
Our weary souls doth tread once more to war,
To march the winds of death and wintry snow.
Most likely fate opens thee heaven’s door.

O Lord, prepare this beast, with dreaded teeth,
to tear the flesh from enemy of dusk.
Grant us the victory - a manelike wreath,
the snap of crocodile, a mammoth’s tusk.

Kiss kindred ghosts of womankind and child.
Thy mind remains on course - don’t hear their cry.
Ever sweeter tis your return...be riled,
Of readiness for battle’s blood. Don’t die!*

Once more thee men of Castle Ballyclough,
We march the winds of death and wintry snow!

9/6/2020
A WARRIOR SONNET
SPONSOR: JOHN LAWLESS

*dictionary shows battle as 2 syllables,
but howmanysyllables.com has it at 1.
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Ashley Avatar
September 30, 2020 at 8:31 PM
Your talent shines in this brilliant sonnet, Kim. Your stunning imagery stirs the imagination and the emotions. Congratulations on your excellent trophy win! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Harding Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 2:12 AM
Awesome sonnet, Kim! My favorite part is the '*'. Haha! Long time no see, glad to see you still sweeping the contests circuit! xoxo LyLy
Rodrigues Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 4:14 AM
Thanks Lycia! Hugs...Kim
Dutta Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 10:53 PM
BIG CONGRATS to win TOP. Love.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 26, 2020 at 5:24 AM
Thank you, Anisha! :)
Marc Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 10:29 PM
Such a great last call to war ~ congratulations on your trophy win!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 26, 2020 at 5:23 AM
Thank you, P.M.!
Roper Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 5:15 PM
Love your interpretation of the the contest. Congratulations on your win, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 7:11 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Lawless Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 1:23 PM
"to march the winds of death and wintry snow.." This one gave me goose bumps and had me looking for my sword. Great job on the theme Kim and thanks for participating
Rodrigues Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 2:14 PM
Thank you so much, John! Loved writing for this theme!
Devonshire Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 12:13 PM
Excellent writing, Kim. Congratulations on your top win! Hugs, Carolyn
Rodrigues Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 2:14 PM
Thank you, Carolyn! Hugs...Kim
Webster Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 11:06 AM
Congratulations Kim! I absolutely agree battle is two syllables.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 11:14 AM
Thank you, Jack!
Kauffman Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 9:33 AM
A wonderful salute to the spirit of the warrior Kim. You have certainly captured all the elements of a call to arms with vivid images. I think I need a sweater after reading! Congratulations on your first place win!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 9:45 AM
Seems war is about discomfort and suffering, leaving loved ones behind, certain death with a slim hope of return, and if - the lingering effects. Thank you, Sam!
Fowler Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 8:28 AM
Absolutely lovely Kim. Congratulations on top win! Linda
Rodrigues Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 8:44 AM
Thank you!
Parker Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 7:33 AM
has a Scottish flavor to it which is half my bloodline, the use of thee and thy is different but fits the theme, well done, good luck
Rodrigues Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 7:42 AM
Thank you, Frederic :)
Laurie Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 9:30 PM
Hello Kim ... a fine sonnet indeed with great meter and rhyme - thank you Kim - Lindsay
Rodrigues Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 5:23 AM
Thank you, Lindsay!
Michael Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 11:53 AM
Battle's on...I can see you on a horse, addressing the warriors...
Rodrigues Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 5:24 AM
Thank you, Arturo! You make me smile :)
Smith Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 11:16 AM
I really enjoyed this sonnet Kim, an excellent write, good luck in the contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 5:24 AM
Thank you, Gary!
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