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Behold thee men of Castle Ballyclogh! Our weary souls doth tread once more to war, To march the winds of death and wintry snow. Most likely fate opens thee heaven’s door. O Lord, prepare this beast, with dreaded teeth, to tear the flesh from enemy of dusk. Grant us the victory - a manelike wreath, the snap of crocodile, a mammoth’s tusk. Kiss kindred ghosts of womankind and child. Thy mind remains on course - don’t hear their cry. Ever sweeter tis your return...be riled, Of readiness for battle’s blood. Don’t die!* Once more thee men of Castle Ballyclough, We march the winds of death and wintry snow! 9/6/2020 A WARRIOR SONNET SPONSOR: JOHN LAWLESS *dictionary shows battle as 2 syllables, but howmanysyllables.com has it at 1.

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Date: 9/30/2020 8:31:00 PM
Your talent shines in this brilliant sonnet, Kim. Your stunning imagery stirs the imagination and the emotions. Congratulations on your excellent trophy win! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/29/2020 2:12:00 AM
Awesome sonnet, Kim! My favorite part is the '*'. Haha! Long time no see, glad to see you still sweeping the contests circuit! xoxo LyLy
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/29/2020 4:14:00 AM
Thanks Lycia! Hugs...Kim
Date: 9/26/2020 2:16:00 PM
This is an exceptional sonnet, and a well deserved win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/26/2020 3:17:00 PM
Thank you so much, Mark!
Date: 9/25/2020 10:53:00 PM
BIG CONGRATS to win TOP. Love.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/26/2020 5:24:00 AM
Thank you, Anisha! :)
Date: 9/25/2020 10:29:00 PM
Such a great last call to war ~ congratulations on your trophy win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/26/2020 5:23:00 AM
Thank you, P.M.!
Date: 9/25/2020 5:15:00 PM
Love your interpretation of the the contest. Congratulations on your win, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/25/2020 7:11:00 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 9/25/2020 1:23:00 PM
"to march the winds of death and wintry snow.." This one gave me goose bumps and had me looking for my sword. Great job on the theme Kim and thanks for participating
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/25/2020 2:14:00 PM
Thank you so much, John! Loved writing for this theme!
Date: 9/25/2020 12:13:00 PM
Excellent writing, Kim. Congratulations on your top win! Hugs, Carolyn
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/25/2020 2:14:00 PM
Thank you, Carolyn! Hugs...Kim
Date: 9/25/2020 11:06:00 AM
Congratulations Kim! I absolutely agree battle is two syllables.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/25/2020 11:14:00 AM
Thank you, Jack!
Date: 9/25/2020 9:33:00 AM
A wonderful salute to the spirit of the warrior Kim. You have certainly captured all the elements of a call to arms with vivid images. I think I need a sweater after reading! Congratulations on your first place win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/25/2020 9:45:00 AM
Seems war is about discomfort and suffering, leaving loved ones behind, certain death with a slim hope of return, and if - the lingering effects. Thank you, Sam!
Date: 9/25/2020 8:28:00 AM
Absolutely lovely Kim. Congratulations on top win! Linda
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/25/2020 8:44:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 9/7/2020 7:33:00 AM
has a Scottish flavor to it which is half my bloodline, the use of thee and thy is different but fits the theme, well done, good luck
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/7/2020 7:42:00 AM
Thank you, Frederic :)
Date: 9/6/2020 9:30:00 PM
Hello Kim ... a fine sonnet indeed with great meter and rhyme - thank you Kim - Lindsay
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/7/2020 5:23:00 AM
Thank you, Lindsay!
Date: 9/6/2020 11:53:00 AM
Battle's on...I can see you on a horse, addressing the warriors...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/7/2020 5:24:00 AM
Thank you, Arturo! You make me smile :)
Date: 9/6/2020 11:16:00 AM
I really enjoyed this sonnet Kim, an excellent write, good luck in the contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/7/2020 5:24:00 AM
Thank you, Gary!

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