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Last Burst In Night's Sky

last burst in night’s sky
stars shimmer and fizzle out. . . . 
 fireflies dance on

For the Poet Doctor's 'HAIKU in 5 7 5 only - Volume 1' Contest

Copyright © Andrea Dietrich | Year Posted 2010

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Skat A Date: 5/16/2015 12:18:00 PM dancing imagery Login to Reply

Jeremy Martin Date: 4/18/2013 6:14:00 AM You make light in the dark so beautifully. Congratulations, Andrea (albeit very belated ;) ) Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/12/2012 10:02:00 PM Andrea, congratulations in Brian's contest...good night..pd Login to Reply

Joann Grisetti Date: 7/12/2012 8:12:00 PM Congratulations on your winnning haiku. Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 7/12/2012 7:04:00 PM Love the picture this brings to mind. Congrats on your win, Andrea! Love, Kim Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 7/12/2012 6:34:00 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Login to Reply

Olusegun Arowolo Date: 7/12/2012 6:14:00 PM Wonderful haiku,Andrea....Great job..Congrats on your well deserved win.... Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 7/12/2012 2:43:00 PM ((()))Congrats...Sara Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 7/12/2012 2:36:00 PM congrats Andrea on a beautiful write so visual with great imagery and a fab win luv..am still dealing with pain in head area.. Ron is doing commenting for me once again..oh.. trying to catch up.. oh puppies.. Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 7/12/2012 7:14:00 AM congrats dear...Ive never seen a firefly..would love to...BG Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 7/12/2012 6:56:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#188" contest Andrea. Love, Carol Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 7/12/2012 4:19:00 AM Andrea congrats on your win..great haiku ...David Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 7/6/2010 8:21:00 AM Congratulations Andrea on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Fireworks". Love, Carol Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 7/6/2010 1:18:00 AM hey I KNOW I commented on this awesome haiku of yours Andrea--where did it go?? now I feel like Sharon, lol she's missing a comment too ;) -- nonetheless super congrats on your win with this one-- I really like how those fireflies kept the show going!! hmm which reminds me I haven't seen those in like forever! --congrats again :) --nikko :) Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 7/5/2010 8:48:00 AM AWESOME, Andrea. I still need work on writing Haiku's. It is a very delicate art fom that I have not mastered as yet. You certainly have. Congratulatios on your well deserved win inDeborh's contest. Love,Lainie Login to Reply

Francine Roberts Date: 7/4/2010 9:24:00 PM nice imagery, great write, congrats on contest Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 7/4/2010 6:26:00 PM Congrats Andrea and here u are at number 5 on your winning Haiku in the Fireworks contest with this remarkable Haiku.. enjoy as u celebrate the 4th my friend. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. AlohA... Login to Reply

Sharon Winter Date: 7/4/2010 7:19:00 AM awesome work - as always! good luck in the contest! thanks for your comment, kindness and encouragement! truth is, these contests fill up so fast I don't get a chance to enter most of them! others are just not for me I guess. just looked at the free verse and its all filled up! oh well. don't know yet about posting new. life has been busy and strange. thanks for thinking of me : )). all the best, shar xoxo Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 7/2/2010 10:37:00 AM Just saw that terrific poem Adeleke wrote for you, Andrea! Every word of the tribute is right on target, dear. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Brian Strand Date: 7/2/2010 12:25:00 AM Nature wins every time Andrea.Beautiful picture.Rgds Brian Hav a good weekend Login to Reply

De R Date: 7/1/2010 11:30:00 PM Super good on this one, the last line was just great...really enjoyed this one...Emily Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 7/1/2010 11:08:00 PM Andrea me again, just to answer you q on "the palette" piece, honestly I didn't have someone specific in mind cause I don't know someone personally that is blind, but I feel honoured that you would think so, it means I've got the message across.. Still don't know where that piece came from.. Love Wilma Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 7/1/2010 2:41:00 PM A very vivid picture you paint here Anrea. winner for sure. Love, Lainie Login to Reply

John Loving Iii Date: 7/1/2010 2:31:00 PM it's the last one that is so disappointing. john Login to Reply

Gert W. Knop Date: 7/1/2010 1:05:00 PM Awesome picture of fireworks, Andrea! enjoyed reding this Haiku tonight and thank you for commenting my poems...:)..Gert Login to Reply

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