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Last Burst In Night's Sky

last burst in night’s sky stars shimmer and fizzle out. . . . fireflies dance on For the Poet Doctor's 'HAIKU in 5 7 5 only - Volume 1' Contest

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Skat A

Date: 5/16/2015 12:18:00 PM

dancing imagery

Jeremy Martin

Date: 4/18/2013 6:14:00 AM

You make light in the dark so beautifully. Congratulations, Andrea (albeit very belated ;) )

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/12/2012 10:02:00 PM

Andrea, congratulations in Brian's contest...good night..pd

Joann Grisetti

Date: 7/12/2012 8:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your winnning haiku.

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/12/2012 7:04:00 PM

Love the picture this brings to mind. Congrats on your win, Andrea! Love, Kim

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/12/2012 6:34:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 7/12/2012 6:14:00 PM

Wonderful haiku,Andrea....Great job..Congrats on your well deserved win....

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/12/2012 2:43:00 PM

((()))Congrats...Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/12/2012 2:36:00 PM

congrats Andrea on a beautiful write so visual with great imagery and a fab win luv..am still dealing with pain in head area.. Ron is doing commenting for me once again..oh.. trying to catch up.. oh puppies..

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/12/2012 7:14:00 AM

congrats dear...Ive never seen a firefly..would love to...BG

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/12/2012 6:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#188" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 7/12/2012 4:19:00 AM

Andrea congrats on your win..great haiku ...David

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/6/2010 8:21:00 AM

Congratulations Andrea on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Fireworks". Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/6/2010 1:18:00 AM

hey I KNOW I commented on this awesome haiku of yours Andrea--where did it go?? now I feel like Sharon, lol she's missing a comment too ;) -- nonetheless super congrats on your win with this one-- I really like how those fireflies kept the show going!! hmm which reminds me I haven't seen those in like forever! --congrats again :) --nikko :)

Elaine George

Date: 7/5/2010 8:48:00 AM

AWESOME, Andrea. I still need work on writing Haiku's. It is a very delicate art fom that I have not mastered as yet. You certainly have. Congratulatios on your well deserved win inDeborh's contest. Love,Lainie

Francine Roberts

Date: 7/4/2010 9:24:00 PM

nice imagery, great write, congrats on contest

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/4/2010 6:26:00 PM

Congrats Andrea and here u are at number 5 on your winning Haiku in the Fireworks contest with this remarkable Haiku.. enjoy as u celebrate the 4th my friend. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. AlohA...

Sharon Winter

Date: 7/4/2010 7:19:00 AM

awesome work - as always! good luck in the contest! thanks for your comment, kindness and encouragement! truth is, these contests fill up so fast I don't get a chance to enter most of them! others are just not for me I guess. just looked at the free verse and its all filled up! oh well. don't know yet about posting new. life has been busy and strange. thanks for thinking of me : )). all the best, shar xoxo

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/2/2010 10:37:00 AM

Just saw that terrific poem Adeleke wrote for you, Andrea! Every word of the tribute is right on target, dear. Love, Carolyn

Brian Strand

Date: 7/2/2010 12:25:00 AM

Nature wins every time Andrea.Beautiful picture.Rgds Brian Hav a good weekend

De R

Date: 7/1/2010 11:30:00 PM

Super good on this one, the last line was just great...really enjoyed this one...Emily

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/1/2010 11:08:00 PM

Andrea me again, just to answer you q on "the palette" piece, honestly I didn't have someone specific in mind cause I don't know someone personally that is blind, but I feel honoured that you would think so, it means I've got the message across.. Still don't know where that piece came from.. Love Wilma

Elaine George

Date: 7/1/2010 2:41:00 PM

A very vivid picture you paint here Anrea. winner for sure. Love, Lainie

John Loving Iii

Date: 7/1/2010 2:31:00 PM

it's the last one that is so disappointing. john

Gert W. Knop

Date: 7/1/2010 1:05:00 PM

Awesome picture of fireworks, Andrea! enjoyed reding this Haiku tonight and thank you for commenting my poems...:)..Gert