Las Vegas Slaughter

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"GATES OF HEAVEN" FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, 03 OCTOBER 2017, MY PHOTO,©

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Oh our Lord, We implore Thee the gates of heavens to open wide For The souls of our innocent slain brothers and sisters To receive!* © Demetrios Trifiatis 03 October 2017 * May our Lord bless the souls of Las Vegas slaughter!

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Afolabi Muideen

Date: 10/8/2017 2:59:00 PM

oh! it pains me whenever i hear that someone dies. May the heaven's gate open wide.

Kudzai Mhangwa

Date: 10/8/2017 5:32:00 AM

May their souls rest in peace. Beautiful peace Demetrios

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/8/2017 2:49:00 AM

A terrible senseless tragedy. This is a lovely tribute to those who have fallen.

Becca Teagan

Date: 10/7/2017 11:32:00 PM

a lovely heartfelt poem, Demetrios.

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/4/2017 6:52:00 AM

I'm sure He did open the gates of Heaven for all those that were needlessly slain in this horrific occurrence! You prayer surely hits home when I read it, and I'm sure the Lord heard it! I loved this incredible poem this morning! What a brilliant piece, Great Work my friend!!

Eve Roper

Date: 10/3/2017 7:44:00 PM

Amen

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/3/2017 11:34:00 AM

- A gate to heaven open stands, as sorrow and pain relieve - Yes, it is open to every soul - Amen - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/3/2017 9:09:00 AM

Hi Demetrios, I stand in agreement with your heartfelt prayer- Alexis

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/3/2017 8:34:00 AM

Amen! God can turn a great sadness into eternal joy. My heart goes out to the family and friends of the fallen and all nations who mourn for their loss.