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Lantern Burn a Gateway

Lantern Burn A Gateway


I waited at the edge of this deserted cave for you to come
to take me home.
Scatter my ashes in the hillside 
Overlooking the blue sea

Paint my face with this red dirt. Harsh is this desert sand
The sun bakes my flesh and dissolves my saliva
My last day’s death a serpent cometh on me 
In haste even my lantern bows slowly day by day
Day is night my oil burns fast
Hurry my love I wait.

Take me away from here remember me
The flight soars high always a bloom the exit only a new.
Pen paper all wrapped up my last sweat, last breadth
Last teardrop.

I made it my sweet; slow is your walk, my heels wish you near
Be close yet stay far. 
I waited to play my harp for you
Come when the dice man role your numbers 
No sooner, better yet later.
 
©2005 Pamela Creary PAC
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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artlyy Avatar
September 15, 2026 at 10:31 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
Agustin Avatar
April 4, 2024 at 2:04 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 10:27 PM
Pamela Angela, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
Higgins Avatar
December 4, 2008 at 9:42 AM
This poem flows well. Great job!
Romero Avatar
December 4, 2008 at 6:14 AM
this was a nice what did you mean stay out of your book? enjoy reading your work, keep on writing on.
Burton Avatar
December 3, 2008 at 10:09 PM
is the name of your book so so so LOL IM ONLY JOKING, your works okay.
Burton Avatar
December 3, 2008 at 7:57 PM
beautiful,we almost think the same with words and formulas of writing, going have to keep an eye out for you.
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