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Language of the Dark

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here in the temple's twilight when worn phrases seem transparent
and the songs of life we meant to share had not been understood
the sun declines all explanation, and there's little left to say




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For Nette's Contest: "Temple of Life"
By Carrie Richards 5/7/14

Copyright © Carrie Richards | Year Posted 2014

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Nette Onclaud Date: 5/13/2014 12:42:00 PM carrie, gee!.. stepping outside your comfort zone and creating a theme that is extraordinary merits a well deserved win in my contest... warm congrats, " there's little left to say..".. huggs Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/13/2014 8:20:00 AM this is wonderful. Don't know your placement but will see later. I am sure it must have placed high. Congrats!! Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 5/13/2014 7:45:00 AM Highly impressive Carrie ! Ur words r so true n touching,, congrats on a merited win ! Login to Reply

Michael Dom Date: 5/13/2014 3:00:00 AM Carrie, this is such skill of expression. I find it meaningful 'and there's little left to say'. Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 5/12/2014 9:05:00 PM Impressive imagery..Congratulations on the win, carrie Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 5/12/2014 3:07:00 PM Yes, there's little left to say....you said it all, albeit in so few words! congratulations:) // paul Login to Reply

Lisa Lee Date: 5/12/2014 2:10:00 PM Wow! Super write, Carrie! Congratulations on your win! Login to Reply

Leon Enriquez Date: 5/7/2014 9:26:00 PM Dear Carrie: Well done. All the best. Leon Login to Reply

Jerry T Curtis Date: 5/7/2014 9:26:00 PM My Dearest Carrie, this it what I call poetry !!! MY Hat is off to you. Login to Reply