Landscapes of The Mind

The mind has  
its own bleak landscapes
that freeze the will,
confine the soul 
to an inner space 
no larger than the self.
I know such worlds
of ice - dark ones
that press against 
the window and give
no light. I am familiar
with the howl 
of its bitter winds
that pick at every crack
as if trying to get in.
I have felt 
its icy grip tighten
almost to the point
where I could not
draw a breath.

I know too
of other places 
in the mind, deeper ones
that plumb almost
to its source
and summon landscapes
of an inner calm where
there are trees, 
wide undulating plains 
and rivers winding
their glistening way 
to the sea. Landscapes
that are drawn 
from the sacred,
composed of poetry
and prayer and carry
the faint recollections
of a somewhere
not far and yet, 
a lifetime away.
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Sidlik Avatar
September 18, 2026 at 9:49 AM
Dear Paul, I stumbled upon your poems by chance. Please forgive me - I am not good at reviewing other authors' work; a good feeling deep down is enough for me... Your poetry is immediate yet profound... A balm for the soul. I am 72 years old and a childless widower. Since my youth, I have battled fatigue and pain (genetic osteoporosis, extensive spinal deformities, Paget's disease of bone). What keeps me going is my nephew - who has mild autism (we are a source of mutual support) and poetry. All the best to you. Marian Sidlik, man, Slovak poet.
Willason Avatar
September 24, 2026 at 2:20 AM
Hi Marian, My sincere thanks for your kind words...found your comments very moving and it is indeed an honour to have you visit. Your story adds weight and significance and provides reasons why poetry matters. Take care, blessings, Paul
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