Landscape

There is a slight breeze,
I see it in the movement
Of the tree's branches,
Though there is total silence
In the early morning light
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Reynolds Avatar
February 1, 2009 at 3:29 AM
A very peacefulled tanka, just lovely, love, Kristin
Moreno Avatar
January 31, 2009 at 8:31 PM
Nice tanka Jim, you have so many. I must come back and read some more...Raul
Richards Avatar
January 31, 2009 at 12:57 PM
Revealing a bit of nature....can't hear it, but watch closely, we can see nature in motion. Nice one! ~ Carrie
Mckenzie Avatar
January 31, 2009 at 12:39 PM
Jim can feel it now great use of imagery. Laura :)
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