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Landing In a Sea of Love

To feel is something foreign, like an untraveled land my emotion carries me through waves of despair the torturous feeling of being swayed away by love. kisses, like oceans deep, full, and lasting I wait, landing in your depths unknown. I anticipate your landing in my depths unknown, unexplored... I stand- Waiting, longing, drifting... Loving your sea of forever.

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Skat A

Date: 7/9/2013 12:35:00 PM

Donna, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

Donna Bellfluer

Date: 7/9/2013 8:50:00 AM

Thanks guys!!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/8/2013 4:37:00 AM

- Hello Donna - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem, hope there will be many more in the future. - Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/6/2013 8:39:00 PM

Hi Donna, -Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"

Poet Tacito

Date: 7/5/2013 3:26:00 PM

This was quite the ride. May you stand, indeed. :) Excellent!