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Land of the Free

Letting go of everything for today Acting as there wasn't a care in the world Not knowing when dawn came Desultory we are not Oh, how it feels to be free Fabricating our lives out of greatness Tearjerkers not allowed beyond this point Headstrong on having fun Embracing the joy and happiness Free of all our worries and problems Reuniting with all you old friends Elegant as the royals Energized still, even after hours LAND OF THE FREE!

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Date: 10/3/2017 1:24:00 PM
Excellent poem. Well written. Freedom surely is a treasure.
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Date: 11/8/2016 9:18:00 AM
I think you did a great job with this acrostic. Sorry for the welcome you got below, we all make mistakes like that and I am sure there was a nicer way of saying your entry in the contest was not valid. Just my opinion.
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