Land of the Free

Pillows on the sky
Greeting the waking peach tree
They're happy and free
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Shahwan Avatar
October 23, 2009 at 8:46 AM
Beautiful poem. pls consider 5/7/5 and re-entry the second line as: Greeting the waking peach tree...thankfully. Wishing you all the best.
Guzzi Avatar
July 13, 2009 at 5:56 AM
nice contest entry! Light & Love
Iloduba Jnr Avatar
June 27, 2009 at 5:04 PM
pillows.....the things they remind me of.cute oneooooooooooo!
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June 26, 2009 at 4:19 PM
You've got me smiling with this uplifting view. Thank you for sharing it with us. Keep on writing. Karen
Fraser Avatar
June 26, 2009 at 8:19 AM
Delighful Haiku Nadine>>James
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