Land of Sorrow

Come go with me to the land of Sorrow
We'll check in the Heartbreak Hotel
Then, we'll take a stroll through Pain City
Throw a memory in Misery Well
Let's take a swim in Teardrop River
And take a ride on the Lonesome Train
Hike on up to Lover's Leap
No more to walk down Memory Lane
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005

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Mason Avatar
September 19, 2008 at 11:13 AM
Don't forget Strawberry Fields Forever ... LOL ... this is a wonderful write Alana ... very clever and a well-deserved selection as a favorite this week! Congratulations.
Young Avatar
September 16, 2008 at 11:37 PM
congratulations on your featured poem. very well deserved. warm regards, GiNo
Fry Avatar
September 16, 2008 at 1:25 PM
Alana....wonderful poetry! Keep writing! Lurve, Cherilyn :)
Fry Avatar
September 16, 2008 at 1:11 PM
excellent! Cherilyn keep up the good writing
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September 15, 2008 at 8:25 AM
Excellent!
Jordan Avatar
September 15, 2008 at 7:49 AM
Haven't heard from you in awhile - Glad to read you again - congrats on being featured
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September 15, 2008 at 6:36 AM
Great write and congratulations on it being featured. I'm a bt older than you so Heartbreak Hotel and Lonesome Town were two of my favorite places musically. God Bless, Lana, nice to see you featured, Vince
Winter Avatar
September 15, 2008 at 6:24 AM
Hi Alana. Missing you and hoping all is well. Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Hugs, Shar xoxo
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September 14, 2008 at 11:49 PM
Congrats on your deserved feature write this week Lana.Rgds Brian
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September 14, 2008 at 6:28 PM
I like the use of the familiar title to forward your message in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Best wishes with your writing and continued success. Karen
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