Land of Sorrow

Come go with me to the land of Sorrow
We'll check in the Heartbreak Hotel
Then, we'll take a stroll through Pain City
Throw a memory in Misery Well
Let's take a swim in Teardrop River
And take a ride on the Lonesome Train
Hike on up to Lover's Leap
No more to walk down Memory Lane
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005


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Date: 9/19/2008 11:13:00 AM
Don't forget Strawberry Fields Forever ... LOL ... this is a wonderful write Alana ... very clever and a well-deserved selection as a favorite this week! Congratulations.
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Date: 9/16/2008 11:37:00 PM
congratulations on your featured poem. very well deserved. warm regards, GiNo
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Date: 9/16/2008 1:25:00 PM
Alana....wonderful poetry! Keep writing! Lurve, Cherilyn :)
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Date: 9/16/2008 1:11:00 PM
excellent! Cherilyn keep up the good writing
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Date: 9/15/2008 8:25:00 AM
Excellent!
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Date: 9/15/2008 7:49:00 AM
Haven't heard from you in awhile - Glad to read you again - congrats on being featured
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Date: 9/15/2008 6:36:00 AM
Great write and congratulations on it being featured. I'm a bt older than you so Heartbreak Hotel and Lonesome Town were two of my favorite places musically. God Bless, Lana, nice to see you featured, Vince
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Date: 9/15/2008 6:24:00 AM
Hi Alana. Missing you and hoping all is well. Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Hugs, Shar xoxo
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Date: 9/14/2008 11:49:00 PM
Congrats on your deserved feature write this week Lana.Rgds Brian
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Date: 9/14/2008 6:28:00 PM
I like the use of the familiar title to forward your message in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Best wishes with your writing and continued success. Karen
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