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Land of Lost Time

Land of lost time... dark isolation
Unobserved recuperation
Not recoverable worry
Nonrecordable story
Unused daily recreation

User only designation
Wasted, postponed, cancellation
Collected space... never to see
Land of lost time

Equal time delineation
Priceless in evaluation
Time forgotten and not to be
Barren fields for eternity
No need for negotiation
Land of lost time


August 17, 2018


Rondeau Contest
By Joseph May
Image #4

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/20/2018 12:32:00 PM
Sage words, Susan. All we have in life is time. Blessings, Gershon
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/20/2018 7:35:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 8/18/2018 10:08:00 AM
love this imaginative write
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/18/2018 4:31:00 PM
Thanks, Jack!
Date: 8/18/2018 1:51:00 AM
the abstract point...stun like a bee
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/18/2018 6:58:00 AM
Thank you for reading and commenting.
Date: 8/18/2018 1:17:00 AM
..."in the chronicles of wasted time...". Your words and thoughts could be so true.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/18/2018 6:57:00 AM
Thank you. :)
Date: 8/17/2018 9:31:00 PM
Never to be is correct...Interesting concept...Nice write...All the best
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/18/2018 6:57:00 AM
Thanks, Arturo!

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