Susan Gentry Poet Rondeau

Land of Lost Time

Land of lost time... dark isolation
Unobserved recuperation
Not recoverable worry
Nonrecordable story
Unused daily recreation

User only designation
Wasted, postponed, cancellation
Collected space... never to see
Land of lost time

Equal time delineation
Priceless in evaluation
Time forgotten and not to be
Barren fields for eternity
No need for negotiation
Land of lost time


August 17, 2018


Rondeau Contest
By Joseph May
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Gershon Wolf August 20, 2018 at 12:32 PM Sage words, Susan. All we have in life is time. Blessings, Gershon Susan Gentry August 20, 2018 at 7:35 PM Thank you!

Jack Horne August 18, 2018 at 10:08 AM love this imaginative write Susan Gentry August 18, 2018 at 4:31 PM Thanks, Jack!

Sand Blown August 18, 2018 at 1:51 AM the abstract point...stun like a bee Susan Gentry August 18, 2018 at 6:58 AM Thank you for reading and commenting.

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton August 18, 2018 at 1:17 AM ..."in the chronicles of wasted time...". Your words and thoughts could be so true. Susan Gentry August 18, 2018 at 6:57 AM Thank you. :)

Arturo Michael August 17, 2018 at 9:31 PM Never to be is correct...Interesting concept...Nice write...All the best Susan Gentry August 18, 2018 at 6:57 AM Thanks, Arturo!