Lampyrid Rhapsody
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*Image of Fireflies, Lightning Bugs, and Glowworms by Old Farmer's Almanac
*Lampyrid Rhapsody
Aliferous light
launched nightlife emanations~~
bombshells arrest eyes
of mini suns erupting
beams, amidst earth's verdant life.
2022 March 09
*1st Place*
Firefly Tanka
~~JCB Brul: Judged 2022 March 16
*Lampyrid: Fireflies, Lightning Bugs, or Glowworms
NOTE: Formerly written as a Haiku, 2021 August 02, presently rewritten as a Tanka, 2022 March 09.
HMS: 5,7,5,7,7.
Copyright © Hilo Poet | Year Posted 2022
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