Lamentations of Sanibel Island

Note: Special thanks to Elizabeth Wesley for planting the seed (another one) for this poem.  And despite the dismal nature of this writing, Sanibel Island is still a beautiful place to see and visit.  


Sanibel, Sanibel, Sanibel dream;
Once we were lovers before I knew what love means.  

I held your hands, your soft white sands
Caressing my fingers tender;
Sanibel, Sanibel where have you have gone
Our love no longer lingers. 

Gone are your spiraling sea shells,
Remains of your deep ocean friends; 
Gone are your crystalline shorelines 
I left my footprints in.

From progress called sky scrapers
And concrete travel parks;
Sanibel, dear Sanibel,
You’ve lost your sweet lovers spark.

Others may find you still lovely
With your great blue egret plumes;
But I’m not fooled for a New York minute
Because I watched shooting stars with you.

While the waves washed in from the distance
And the tides came and went with the moon;
I gave you my all while following the call
And you left me far too soon.  

Sanibel, Sanibel, Sanibel dream;
Once we were lovers before I knew what love means.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 9/15/2011 5:21:00 PM
very beautiful work....is Sanibel Island in Florida??
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Date: 9/15/2011 8:40:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today Terrell. Let the words continue to flow from your pen. I still have a seashell picked up from the beach on Sanibel Island.Love, Carol
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Date: 9/15/2011 3:18:00 AM
Great piece. Emotions penned wonderfully. Thanks to Elizabeth for "planting the seed".
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Date: 9/14/2011 7:51:00 PM
I have goose bumps Terry. The vision is alive in my heart as I read your words and how true, the lonely beauty is gone and civilization has moved in with a vengeance. The verse has all the echoes of sadness for days now gone, A beautiful write dear friend, it is your imagination that created this wonder, nothing to do with me!
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Date: 9/14/2011 4:59:00 PM
oh kudos to elizabeth ..she is a true inspiration with her lovely lines of poetry luv..
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Date: 9/14/2011 4:58:00 PM
an awesome write of emotion and deep feelings for this special place Terrell and lovely visuals progress throughout this piece ... descriptions of the seashells sparked my attention as I am a beach girl at heart luv.. fabulous.. wish I could visit..
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