Lamentation

Another song from the set made in middle school
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My life craves the soul And I’m all alone You stay—then off you go And I can’t hold on You will never know me For what I am [oh no] Can we forget? Can this just end? If we don’t believe How can we mend? Your face haunts my memory And I can’t move on Cuz here without you I feel…so numb Left out in the cold For you will never love me Was I too much [to mend]? But how can you see? How can you know [what I meant to you]? Could this be the end of the road Left to sleep alone? -Ooooooooh- Can we forget? Can this just end? If we don’t believe— Can I forget? Will my life end? If you don’t exist Why do I pretend?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/23/2013 7:57:00 PM
laura. i was checking my email and you mysteriously pop-up on my computer. this poem of yours. okay for the 2nd. time i will give you my email address(Ihavebeensearching@gmail.com). i don't know if you want my friendship. so if you do then email me. this poem hurts laqura. yet its so profoundly moving to the wandering soul.
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Date: 1/9/2012 7:53:00 PM
dear laura. why lament, when you bring the sweet breath of hope and love to all who know you, and know of you. why do you lament precious dove? why?(wonderingboy82@gmail.com-email me please)
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Date: 1/5/2012 5:13:00 PM
Dear Laura, YOUR Writting is Unique, YOUR Admirer ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...Harry
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Date: 8/29/2011 11:55:00 PM
Awesome write Laura flows well a tell of lost love of yesterdays, however we all keep our hopes alive that down the road we will be fufilled...with love...old Jack
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