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Line Gauthier's Contest: Bite Size Poetry No89 Aug 29, 2024

Lamentation

The seashore holds me in grief
entwined with moss and nettle; 
while thud of echoes returns
more shrill than a gull's lament...
In decibels of love passing
I hunger for night's soft caress.

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Len Gasun

September 26, 2024 at 11:17 PM

Coming back to enjoy this stellar poem and to congratulate you belatedly on your win my dear poet friend Nette! Hugs...hugs

Andrea Dietrich

September 13, 2024 at 5:40 AM

Love this, Nette. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Reason A. Poteet

September 10, 2024 at 5:30 AM

Beautiful brevity which is what Line inspires with her six or less lines. The call is loud for soft hungering. Great, Nette.

Crystol Woods

September 9, 2024 at 12:48 PM

Sweet! So much said in so few words... it takes talent to do that! Xo

Regina Mcintosh

September 7, 2024 at 1:05 PM

Wonderful. Congrats. God bless you always, love, Gina

Line Gauthier

September 7, 2024 at 11:07 AM

beautiful ~

Paige Hind

August 29, 2024 at 3:25 PM

Lovely writing, Nette...loved the decibels of love...

Paula Goldsmith

August 29, 2024 at 12:45 PM

I enjoyed reading your "Lamentation" write. "Good Luck" Have a blessed/great day writing away.................

Ink Empress

August 29, 2024 at 4:57 AM

“ i hunger for night’s soft caress” that, i felt so deeply! What a profound and well written poem, that flows with metaphors and imagery so eloquently woven! Pleasure reading this touching poem! I felt the emotions! Best wishes always. Sending you light

Len Gasun

August 28, 2024 at 7:35 PM

A gorgeous moving poem my dear poet friend Nette. In decibels of love passing, I hunger for night's soft caress- a melancholic megabeauty dear friend. Great winning piece for me. Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Come back later to read more. My 1 vacant period is almost over. Sending lots of love and blessings. Hugs

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