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Lamentation

The seashore holds me in grief
entwined with moss and nettle; 
while thud of echoes returns
more shrill than a gull's lament...
In decibels of love passing
I hunger for night's soft caress.

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2024

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Len Gasun Date: 9/26/2024 11:17:00 PM Coming back to enjoy this stellar poem and to congratulate you belatedly on your win my dear poet friend Nette! Hugs...hugs Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/13/2024 5:40:00 AM Love this, Nette. Congrats on your well deserved win. Login to Reply

Reason A. Poteet Date: 9/10/2024 5:30:00 AM Beautiful brevity which is what Line inspires with her six or less lines. The call is loud for soft hungering. Great, Nette. Login to Reply

Crystol Woods Date: 9/9/2024 12:48:00 PM Sweet! So much said in so few words... it takes talent to do that! Xo Login to Reply

Regina Mcintosh Date: 9/7/2024 1:05:00 PM Wonderful. Congrats. God bless you always, love, Gina Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 9/7/2024 11:07:00 AM beautiful ~ Login to Reply

Paige Hind Date: 8/29/2024 3:25:00 PM Lovely writing, Nette...loved the decibels of love... Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/29/2024 12:45:00 PM I enjoyed reading your "Lamentation" write.  "Good Luck" Have a blessed/great day writing away................. Login to Reply

Ink Empress Date: 8/29/2024 4:57:00 AM “ i hunger for night’s soft caress” that, i felt so deeply! What a profound and well written poem, that flows with metaphors and imagery so eloquently woven! Pleasure reading this touching poem! I felt the emotions! Best wishes always. Sending you light Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 8/28/2024 7:35:00 PM A gorgeous moving poem my dear poet friend Nette. In decibels of love passing, I hunger for night's soft caress- a melancholic megabeauty dear friend. Great winning piece for me. Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Come back later to read more. My 1 vacant period is almost over. Sending lots of love and blessings. Hugs Login to Reply