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Line Gauthier's Contest: Bite Size Poetry No89 Aug 29, 2024

The seashore holds me in grief entwined with moss and nettle; while thud of echoes returns more shrill than a gull's lament... In decibels of love passing I hunger for night's soft caress.

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Len Gasun

Date: 9/26/2024 11:17:00 PM

Coming back to enjoy this stellar poem and to congratulate you belatedly on your win my dear poet friend Nette! Hugs...hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/13/2024 5:40:00 AM

Love this, Nette. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 9/10/2024 5:30:00 AM

Beautiful brevity which is what Line inspires with her six or less lines. The call is loud for soft hungering. Great, Nette.

Crystol Woods

Date: 9/9/2024 12:48:00 PM

Sweet! So much said in so few words... it takes talent to do that! Xo

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/7/2024 1:05:00 PM

Wonderful. Congrats. God bless you always, love, Gina

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/7/2024 11:07:00 AM

beautiful ~

Paige Hind

Date: 8/29/2024 3:25:00 PM

Lovely writing, Nette...loved the decibels of love...

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/29/2024 12:45:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your "Lamentation" write. "Good Luck" Have a blessed/great day writing away.................

Ink Empress

Date: 8/29/2024 4:57:00 AM

“ i hunger for night’s soft caress” that, i felt so deeply! What a profound and well written poem, that flows with metaphors and imagery so eloquently woven! Pleasure reading this touching poem! I felt the emotions! Best wishes always. Sending you light

Len Gasun

Date: 8/28/2024 7:35:00 PM

A gorgeous moving poem my dear poet friend Nette. In decibels of love passing, I hunger for night's soft caress- a melancholic megabeauty dear friend. Great winning piece for me. Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Come back later to read more. My 1 vacant period is almost over. Sending lots of love and blessings. Hugs