Get Your Premium Membership

Lament

Now that the old cloud of clumsy curse Encountered with my gentle person And branched over me, a horrible Tree of lightening, crushed me almost To desert like a lonely cacti. And those rest on my couch cozy With the blades of beautiful boughs Tear apart my mattress of love Exposing me to steel bars Eating up the flesh of my back Breaking this old mine and wrecked spine. The streak of old sun now In the disguise of warmth Piercing through artless bones Nothing but a pain plain I laughed for after all At senses, I'd have wept

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/20/2016 10:16:00 AM
barq, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
Login to Reply
Date: 12/20/2015 2:25:00 PM
MB , stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
Login to Reply
Date: 5/21/2015 11:58:00 PM
The poem is dipped in agony,melancholy,and tears which makes the reader experience every bit of it.Indeed,the poem is a work of art
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs