Lament

Now that the old cloud of clumsy curse
Encountered with my gentle person
And branched over me, a horrible
Tree of lightening, crushed me almost
To desert like a lonely cacti.

And those rest on my couch cozy
With the blades of beautiful boughs
Tear apart my mattress of love
Exposing me to steel bars
Eating up the flesh of my back
Breaking this old mine and wrecked spine.

The streak of old sun now
In the disguise of warmth
Piercing through artless bones
Nothing but a pain plain
I laughed for after all
At senses, I'd have wept
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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February 20, 2016 at 10:16 AM
barq, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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December 20, 2015 at 2:25 PM
MB , stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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May 21, 2015 at 11:58 PM
The poem is dipped in agony,melancholy,and tears which makes the reader experience every bit of it.Indeed,the poem is a work of art
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