Lament

The sun has set and evening falls. A silver sliver-moon hangs high above my house; behind its walls I’ve made my bed, and here I lie. I think of times star light, star bright, a girl who never questioned why she dreamed awake with all her might. I’ve made my bed and here I lie. Those wishes wished so long ago are still no closer than the sky that’s filled with summer stars aglow. I’ve made my bed and here I lie. And though I’m warm inside my room, long shadows of the night pass by my window shade and cast their gloom. I’ve made my bed and here I lie. How sensible, how dull my schemes! Beneath my comforter, I sigh remembering my tarnished dreams. I’ve made my bed, and here I lie. For JP Contest 5: Feelings (Feeling regret as a sense of loss and longing for someone or something gone or passed out of existence)
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Watt Avatar
May 1, 2020 at 10:57 AM
I thought I had read this one before, but couldn't find it in your chapbooks. I thought I left a comment before, but I guess not, strange! Viv is right, this one will never date. Such perfect poetry and one I think most of us can relate to in those unfulfilled dreams of our youth. Believe it or not, I wanted to be a pro baseball player! Hugs ~ John
Wigley Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 11:22 AM
Excellent, sadly. The style suits the sentiment, in it's wistful repetitveness. And it will never date. x
Delaney Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 6:16 AM
Hey Andrea: Congratulations on your top placement. We can all relate to un-met expectations....oops I mean dreams....lol Love you, SuZ
Devnath  Avatar
August 1, 2016 at 10:50 AM
Wonderful poem my friend. Congrats on your superb win. A 7. Hugs, Cloudy Poet
Daniel Avatar
August 1, 2016 at 12:55 AM
Nice one Andrea:) Just expresses my feelings right now:) Congratulations on your win:)
Dom Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 4:22 PM
A comforting cell our beds may be, but also a doorway to the stars...when we dream. This is a well placed poem. Congratulations!
Smith Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 10:21 PM
Glad you reposted, I wasn't here for the first edition. Congratulations Andrea...
Godwin Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 9:13 PM
Congratulations on THE top spot! Go, Andrea, go! (got sidetracked by family earlier and now just have a couple of minutes) ... CayCay
A   Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 8:40 PM
Andrea, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest --- 101 in a row. :) Stop by my blog "They Hang Horses, Don't They?" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
A   Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 8:37 PM
Andrea, I know exactly how you feel on them tarnished dream. Love it. LINDA
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 10:51 AM
:) a challenging write noted with the quote.. I feel like the 2nd stanza though however I'm not this girl..:) rather I keep on going ..:) with hope determination and faith placed to actions..:) glad I choose this from your poems...:)GBU
Davis Avatar
April 19, 2014 at 8:05 AM
Andrea What a deep and powerful write. I could feel the emotional anguish in each line. Thank you for the sweet comment on my ESS Of Love poem.
Watson Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 7:33 PM
I am sure the dreams that share a bed with you. Realise they are a dream come true.
Fode Avatar
February 19, 2014 at 12:36 PM
I love this one. Great repetition of the final line. A cliche reinvented.
Fode Avatar
February 19, 2014 at 12:36 PM
I love this one. Great repetition of the final line. A cliche reinvented.
Johnson Avatar
December 26, 2013 at 3:03 PM
The road not taken is one nobody knows. Whether high or whether low. Does it matter if no one goes? Peace. :)
Kendrick Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 7:31 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Merry, Merry Christmas To You And Your Family!!! Sara
Jerden Avatar
December 21, 2013 at 3:45 PM
I like the way you used the quote. Most folks would have used the opposite approach, i.e taking chances, instead of describing wasted dreams. Congrats, Roy
Seal Avatar
December 20, 2013 at 7:50 PM
Hmmmm you don't sound too happy in that bed Petal. at least you have a new comforter in the shape of another win lol. Congratulations. Take care, Richard
Mehta Avatar
December 20, 2013 at 4:12 AM
Enjoyed the write on the selected quote and congrats on the fine win, Andrea
A   Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 8:53 PM
Andrea, , Congratulations on your awesome win... always~ LINDA
Widjanarko Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 4:27 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea, a very deserve win for a very beautiful piece :3 hug, Yanny
Jones Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 2:34 PM
A wonderful job Andrea....went so well with the quote...congratulations
Hessler Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 1:05 PM
that's beautiful congats
Andresen Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 11:49 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem Andrea in: Relate your poem to one of these quotes, Contest - Sponsored by: Giorgio V. - Nice to participate - and enjoyable to read ALL winning poems! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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