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Lament

Like stained thorns that left perennial agony on my wounded knees, your parting words pervaded through my veins~ inflicting an excruciating pain that lingered on like unceasing rain. And here beneath the dark clouds as I glance upon the silhouettes of the ruins of a once silent sanctuary of our unrequited love~ teardrops fall As I recall the gentle echo of your song. Now I still, I still don't know ~ the way back to my self again. Just let me pick my broken pieces that I may be whole again. September 16,2021 Modified from my poem, “Like An Arrow” For “L” Contest New or Old Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France

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Date: 9/29/2021 3:48:00 PM
Dear Friend, Congratulations on your win. Romanticism mixed with sadness and broken heart - a truly emotional poem portrayed beautifully. Love and hugs ~ Mala
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Date: 9/22/2021 9:40:00 AM
JCB, congratulations on your win in my L contest with your beautiful and emotional poem, excellent writing ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 9/21/2021 10:41:00 AM
"Stained thorns," "perennial agony," "gentle echo of your song" - wonderful imagery to describe "broken pieces" JCB. We can almost reach out and touch your pain - feel its presence. Powerful words in vivid poetic expression my friend. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 9/19/2021 2:24:00 AM
So painful and emotional apt for the theme dear JCB... I hope you are well dear friend... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 9/19/2021 4:44:00 AM
Hi Ani I am well. This was only modified from a poem long ago. I wish you well, too.
Date: 9/16/2021 2:49:00 PM
Very powerful poem.
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Date: 9/15/2021 10:15:00 PM
Beautiful write, JCB.. a winner
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