Lament

Like stained thorns
that left perennial agony
on my wounded knees,
your parting words pervaded
through my veins~
inflicting an excruciating pain
that lingered on like unceasing rain.


And here beneath the dark clouds
as I glance upon the silhouettes
of the ruins of a once silent sanctuary 
of our unrequited love~ teardrops fall
As I recall the gentle echo of your song.

Now I still,
I still don't know ~
the way back to my self again.
Just let me pick my broken pieces 
that I may be whole again.


September 16,2021

Modified from my poem, “Like An Arrow”
For “L” Contest New or Old Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Constance La France
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 29, 2021 at 3:48 PM
Dear Friend, Congratulations on your win. Romanticism mixed with sadness and broken heart - a truly emotional poem portrayed beautifully. Love and hugs ~ Mala
La France Avatar
September 22, 2021 at 9:40 AM
JCB, congratulations on your win in my L contest with your beautiful and emotional poem, excellent writing ~ love and serenity _Constance
Kauffman Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 10:41 AM
"Stained thorns," "perennial agony," "gentle echo of your song" - wonderful imagery to describe "broken pieces" JCB. We can almost reach out and touch your pain - feel its presence. Powerful words in vivid poetic expression my friend. Congratulations on your win!
Jayasankar Avatar
September 19, 2021 at 2:24 AM
So painful and emotional apt for the theme dear JCB... I hope you are well dear friend... Hugs... ~ Ani
Brul Avatar
September 19, 2021 at 4:44 AM
Hi Ani I am well. This was only modified from a poem long ago. I wish you well, too.
Bayles Avatar
September 16, 2021 at 2:49 PM
Very powerful poem.
Roper Avatar
September 15, 2021 at 10:15 PM
Beautiful write, JCB.. a winner
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