Lament

Would that LIFE were like the magazine
each article proof read
buffed and polished to a fine sheen
edited and re-edited
pictures cropped as needed
photo shopped perfection
at odds with the “camera”.

A full faced “lie” on the cover
reveling in “romantic recall”
basking in the loneliness
of the present.


9/15/2021

“L” Contest New or Old Poetry Contest
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La France Avatar
September 22, 2021 at 9:31 AM
John, congratulations on your win in my L contest with your beautiful poem, excellent writing ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Kauffman Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 10:14 AM
John, wonderful metaphoric lament - yearning in the pursuit of perfection just beyond our reach so well expressed. Congratulations on your win. This simple, yet ultra-familiar, image speaks volumes! Blessings to you.
Blodgett Avatar
September 17, 2021 at 2:14 AM
Powerful words John. It makes me wish for a more simple life without mass media, money, ego, etc. give me a simple cabin and firelight any day. Congratulations!
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September 16, 2021 at 2:36 PM
Food for thought John, if life were like a magazine all women would be beauty queens and men alike Adonis, perfection? I think not, far from it. Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Belle
Evans Avatar
September 15, 2021 at 9:00 AM
So so true. It seems that the "present" is consumed with money, vanity, power!!! Some notable for living in pretense......lies...... I don't think it is for them to lament for lies is their truth and power is their strength and vanity is their confidence.
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