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Lament

So very long the time since you've been gone This lovelorn night a cold moon has reckoned Into such gloom my wistful heart be drawn It palls and weeps to woeful skies that beckon This lovelorn night a cold moon has reckoned Barren and empty in the vigil of tears It palls and weeps to woeful skies that beckon Lamenting mournful prayer on silent deafened ears Barren and empty in the vigil of tears Into such gloom my wistful heart be drawn Lamenting mournful prayer on silent deafened ears So very long the time since you've been gone

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Date: 9/22/2021 11:46:00 AM
Congratulations Lonna for your win with this wistful, forlorn lament of lost love. Your words really set the scene through nightfall and crestfallen hopes. Impactful pantoum. All the best.
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 10/7/2021 9:38:00 AM
Sam, sorry it has taken so long to respond. But please know how much I appreciate your comments. Make a heart feel good.
Date: 9/22/2021 10:05:00 AM
Lonna, congratulations on your win in my L contest with your wonderful poem, splendid writing~ love and serenity _Constance
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 10/7/2021 9:37:00 AM
Sorry its taken so long for me to respond. Sometimes times are difficult. But do appreciate your wonderful comments always!
Date: 9/16/2021 10:07:00 AM
"This lovelorn night a cold moon has reckoned Barren and empty in the vigil of tears" Beautiful lines. Intense lonely feelings are brought out. Congratulations!
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 9/17/2021 6:51:00 PM
I truly appreciate your comments. Thanks! Lonna
Date: 2/29/2020 12:16:00 PM
Lonna, congratulations on your winning pantoum. So many wonderful images, they flow like your "vigil of tears."
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 2/29/2020 1:50:00 PM
Thank you Sam! Lonna

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