Lake Superior Is Sad Today

No willows weep along this craggy shore

Winter's unforgiving shock no test for
 weaker limbs

Pine trees and the barren Birch remain, their
hearts cold

Steely eyes glimmer with icy stares at Raven's
     perch                      and passing Gulls

Bankers loan a timid step, the endless lake
a promise of frozen dreams

The wind stopped just short of my ears, bitter
news the breeze carried unable to fill my 
senses

I left yesterday's newspaper on the table

 today's issue unwelcome

All I could think of was                     what will I be seeing
hearing or smelling             when the wind resumes?

The smell of fresh flowers deposits me back

in that church      4 years old       as I looked in at my
 Grandpa's

frozen face         in the coffin at his funeral

 roses  and  lilacs

weren't there

                    I can

                            smell them

                                              and 

                                                           smile...



04/27/15
2am
© james marshall goff

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 6/20/2015 10:15:00 PM
James, wow and amazing, love this style, reminds me a bit of EE Cummings who inspired some of my writes for example my poem My Cloud by Broken Wings and Bite Me, both really on the same theme, both winning poems, I want to do a poem in this style you have penned so beautifully, a perfect 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, bird song
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Date: 6/4/2015 10:30:00 AM
What a marvelous read from a blessed paged built on lines constructed with the lyrics of the skies and words well supported by dynamic foamy clouds. Message well expressed! No doubt an absolute 7##.
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Date: 5/5/2015 6:58:00 AM
James, oh my, I love this write, the words, the raw emotion and the layout, awesome, 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, An Ojibwa... and for leaving that beautiful comment
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Date: 4/26/2015 2:16:00 AM
I have been shocked as well...
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