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lake of fire

too late to turn back sang the symphony of sorrow you must pay for your sins and the sentence is eternal going through a tunnel like funnel cloud terror saw your entire life played on dirty cracked mirrors can't turn around,no your home is straight ahead it's not a nightmare that left you bleeding in your bed cuts and slashes to your mind,heart,and soul this journey into darkness you have to do alone you had a million chances to come into the light Gods angels begged you please but those demons left you blind deaf and dumb mindless and numb your only thought was more that was your only rule of thumb you let the devil play you,he told you you were his ace now you see you're just his joker as he's laughing in your face the signpost reads, :LAKE OF FIRE JUST AHEAD now your sobbing turns to screaming and your fear it turns to madness you hear laughter all around you,and evil gladness now you're on a roller coaster with one hundred other fools low learning insane victims and low life living imbred ghouls the cart it rocks and rolls soon it will go off the tracks and the fire is getting closer,demons crawling up your back and you scream unholy anguish as you fall into the fire the devil laughs forever inside your mind full of devilish desire "WELCOME HOME SON TO THE BURNING LAKE OF FIRE"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 9/1/2010 3:08:00 PM
Excellent piece, with a little effort I wonder if this could be made into a song? A very vivid read enjoyed the metaphors, dark poem teetering on the edge of the lake
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Date: 7/9/2010 12:30:00 PM
a devious write lol,, very cool write,, enjoyed...P.D.
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