Lake of Angst
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Written for The Trionet Contest sponsored By Emile J Pinet Trionet is a form Created by L Milton Hankins;
The first stanza follows the rules for a standard triolet of eight (8) lines ABaAabAB (capital letters are repeated lines). The second stanza consists of six (6) lines, formed with five (5) lines repeated from the first stanza and adding an appropriate non-repeated rhyming last line with a rhyme scheme of AAABBb.
Mild mauve sky streams like lakes of blushing pearls
weaving clouds of hope beneath my veiled tears,
shrouding streaks of scarred sunsets with soft swirls.
Mild mauve sky streams like lakes of blushing pearls.
I turn to rose stars as midnight unfurls,
and the moon serves love amidst woeful years.
Mild mauve sky streams like lakes of blushing pearls,
weaving clouds of hope beneath my veiled tears.
Mild mauve sky streams like lakes of blushing pearls,
shrouding streaks of scarred sunsets with soft swirls.
I turn to rose stars as midnight unfurls,
and the moon serves love amidst woeful years;
weaving clouds of hope beneath my veiled tears,
he feels the frozen angst behind my fears.
Copyright © Ink Empress | Year Posted 2024
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