Faye Gibson Poet Choka

Lake Morning

Powdered gray, the moss,
intricate lace, decorates
giant cypress on the shore
gnarled knees offer post
where watchful birds keep vigil-
holy lake sanctuary.

Copyright, September 19, 2014
Faye Lanham Gibson

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Brenda Meier-Hans September 30, 2014 at 1:36 PM Congratulations on your win Faye.

Nette Onclaud September 28, 2014 at 1:39 AM the images make me fly, faye... like andie, I'd give this no.1 spot.. cheers on your stunning win.. huggs

Andrea Dietrich September 27, 2014 at 9:31 PM wow. Of all I have yet seen, this one may have been my number one if I had been the judge!! Congrats in the contest. How are you doing?

Earl Schumacker September 27, 2014 at 5:44 PM Hi Faye, Interesting subject matter and execution. Nicely done. Congratulations on your win. Take care. Earl

Abdul Malik Mandani September 27, 2014 at 10:18 AM Nicely written. 'Where watchful birds keep vigil'. Congrats.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 27, 2014 at 9:53 AM Wow wonderful lake morning Faye! Congrats on big win!

Richard Lamoureux September 27, 2014 at 9:14 AM I just love being on or near a lake. This is a lovely picture. Congratulations Faye.

Maurice Yvonne September 27, 2014 at 7:53 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win with this gorgeous choka.

Paul Callus September 27, 2014 at 6:20 AM What a lovely choka and attractive morning sight, Faye! Makes for a deserved win.....congratulations! // paul

Dr.Ram Mehta September 27, 2014 at 2:09 AM Thanks for the entry and support. Congrats on the win, Faye

Nette Onclaud September 19, 2014 at 3:34 PM what a vivid and perfect picture of nature... wonderful piece of writing, faye.. hugggs

Jan Allison September 19, 2014 at 8:45 AM wonderful imagery Faye:-) Hugs Jan xx

John Lawless September 19, 2014 at 7:58 AM Well done Faye, paints a nice picture of a quiet lake.

Eileen Manassian September 19, 2014 at 7:14 AM How beautiful. God's handiwork is always a source of comfort and joy. I've just gotten back from holidays. I understand you're still on vacation. Enjoy, my dear.