Lake Lover

Luna’s image reflects on flat water;
she smiles at her likeness and ripples softly quiver.
Beneath the glinting surface another universe exists
where subaqueous creatures live, busy in their nests.
Moss shawls arm drape low on sitting cypress tree,
ungainly, with legs so short below her knees.
Yellow pollen gathers brightly, floating along the dock
forming lacy fabric, the moon’s evening frock;
oh, that I could be she waltzing on this liquid floor,
evermore a lover of the lake.

March 6, 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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La France Avatar
March 19, 2022 at 8:23 AM
Faye, congratulations on your win in my Imagism contest with your wonderful poem full of imagery ~Constance
Poet Avatar
March 18, 2022 at 11:22 AM
Congratulations on your contest win with this well-deserved writing, Faye. I hope you doing well.
Dietrich Avatar
March 8, 2022 at 1:40 PM
just gorgeous, Faye. you have that WAY!!!
Mcconnell Avatar
March 8, 2022 at 1:00 PM
Lovely penning Faye, with great imagery and mesmerizing tone to hold one in its grasp. Blessings, Gordon
Leiser Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 8:46 PM
Wonderful poem that creates a picture perfect image, Faye! I especially liked the line, “ forming lacy fabric, the moon’s evening frock”..brilliant! Best of luck in the contest! :)
Rose  Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 3:28 PM
I love your beautifully imagery dear poetess, gl in the contest, this is wonderful to read .
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 3:07 PM
Hello FaveGibson so nice to meet you. Well done . I felt like I was there. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Amadore Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 1:47 PM
I read your poem with interest and hope you will continue to favor us with your work.
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