Lake Illawarra

The name pronounces in a Chinese mind
Sounds similar to onomatopoeia words made
When hearts felt  phonologically bored  
By a misthought on linguistically decaying 
Or a loss of ordered hilarious carouse

Anyway, I have been quietly with it for years, 
With countless eyesight over my shoulders 
It is a famous existence contrasting to mine
A neighbor to whom needless to talk to

But we are a collective name to represent 
For a belonging of the people living around 
 A lake of water that is so clean and quiet

We've been staying as such for years 
Having a short  meeting with each other 
Such as young men and women on blind dates
Full filled with shyness, reluctance, and desires

but we are so different from them by degrees
Both of the acceptance and of the integration
Included with people by their homes and lands 
By ways of simple, obvious, and unconditional 

I stay with this lake alike the pines on shore
With the algae in water, the birds overhead 
While fish swim, shrimp jumps, and jellyfish dance

All between us are inclusive and simple 
They are obvious no need to be garrulous 
For apprehension by persons used to flaunt

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